|Reviews for Rough Petals|
| twiinklex chapter 24 . 4/17
Started out not being a big fan of this story because I preferred Joss' personality over Charlie's and I found the plot / characters / relationships pretty bland but you eventually had me sold. I gotta admit, the story and writing really improved a lot towards the end. I liked how emotional the last few chapters were and that's the kind of story I enjoy reading.
Perfect ending, really. I rarely feel satisfied everytime a story ends because it always feels too rushed or inadequate after all the time I spent reading it (even Sleeping With The Enemy made me feel a bit like that, as good as it was and as much as I liked it) but Rough Petals was an exception.
I vote for the high school romance because I'm a sucker for such things. Unfortunately it seems that you are no longer updating... :( hope to see your return soon! You're a good writer.
| holly chapter 4 . 4/5
This story is so good. I'm makes me so sad to know that you're not writing here anymore.
| Ystarr chapter 24 . 3/6
| Celina Greene chapter 23 . 2/17
Omg i love this story! 3 i cried during the part with noah, charlie and cole on the roof...silly me!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/3
only on the 3rd chapter in and entirely in love with the writing style. The banter is fabulous. It's the little things as well. "She's cute isn't she?" He snorted. "Yeah, if I close my eyes" I just love it! Thanks for your great work, I'm really enjoying this read :)
| CRYSTAL2 chapter 1 . 1/31
this is great so far can't wait to read more!
| PenguinLover33 chapter 24 . 12/8/2013
This story is amazing. Good job!
| Hi chapter 12 . 12/7/2013
I think this is even better than the prequel. I didn't even think that was possible. You have some major talent for writing- the kind that some people just have. I love all the characters- Cole and his adorable smirk- and I like Charlie better than Joss- probably because she's going to be with Cole. I really like how it the plot turned out- Joss with Jack, so now Cole can find love! :) I just really really love this 3333
| Guest chapter 24 . 10/16/2013
Oh my gosh, I loved this story sooo much. Sometime I wanted Charlie and Cole to have more romantic scenes, but I just LOVED this story. I read it all in one day!
| macy8 chapter 5 . 9/28/2013
haha that was adorable
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/28/2013
You wrote this story a few years ago, but I just wanted to say that it's one of the best fictionpress stories I've read so far. I really adored Cole, and Charlie too (props for that. Too many female characters end up getting on my nerves.) I was halfway through the story before I realized that it was really good and the characters had grown on me.
The scene where Cole came to the rooftop was beautiful. I can't describe my feels. :)
Thanks for writing this! I enjoyed it immensly! :)
| AlanisBRAVO chapter 23 . 8/4/2013
Oh , man... This story was amazing. I loved every minute of it, I love them together
| VeronaViridian chapter 22 . 7/20/2013
OMG! This chapter literally made me cry!
I have tears streaming down my face and everything . .
Thank you so much for writing this!
Looking forward to your future works . .
This story is too cute . . and such an inspiration!
I mean . . on the aspect of hopelessly romantic heroes . . Aww . . Cole is too . . well . . cute!
I see now that I need to come up with more adjectives . . hmm . . off I go now to read a thesaurus!
| thevinylcountdown chapter 24 . 6/1/2013
Your story is brilliant and moving. I actually cried while reading the rooftop scene!
| scriibble chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
i read this story in less that 24 hours it was so amazing. i love this story!