Reviews for Rough Petals
leavesfallingup chapter 21 . 11/8/2012
You're enjoying dragging this out entirely too much.
leavesfallingup chapter 19 . 11/8/2012
It did come back to haunt her. It was impossible that it wouldn't when they live and work in the same area.
leavesfallingup chapter 18 . 11/8/2012
Vince turned out to be truly scary. He doesn't respect the girls he pays for, so naturally he doesn't feel any compunction to be kind. Wonder how much the fish cost?

Poor Cole: blamed for the abuse and confronted by man-mountain Noah.

Is the Vince issue completely over?
leavesfallingup chapter 17 . 11/8/2012
Hatred and bitterness is a poison that affects the hater, the hated, and any number of others who get caught in the crossfire.
leavesfallingup chapter 16 . 11/8/2012
That was a dramatic event, made more so because it threw people together who never wanted to be together again. What a mess.

The little girl is cute.

How did you type this story with such tiny hands (claws)? Do they make special typewriters for squirrells?
leavesfallingup chapter 15 . 11/8/2012
It is never pretty to see how children and parents who dislike each other behave. It is sad and it never makes anyone look good.
leavesfallingup chapter 14 . 11/8/2012
The title, as well as that entire conversation, was funny. The next story was sad.

What is she going to do about Vince now? Will he gracefully leave her alone or will he cause problems? Somehow the possibility of people finding out what she was doing is like a shadow on the story.
leavesfallingup chapter 13 . 11/8/2012
So they are finally together. The fight didn't make a lot of sense... and I'm a guy. At least it made the two guys relax afterwards.
leavesfallingup chapter 12 . 11/8/2012
The scene with the dog would have played out perfectly on the big screen. That was hilarious
leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 11/8/2012
That was unfortunate. She is already afraid of opening her heart to a true relationship, so this would be devastating.
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 11/7/2012
You can't help but feel sorry for Mel. He had to know that she was hoping for at least a little enthusiasm. So why did he deliberately hurt her like that? Up until this point in the story I liked the guy, but now I'm just a little confused. His actions don't seem to be in-character with his previous behavior in the story.

Is he deliberately pushing Mel away so that she'll move on with her life?
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 11/7/2012
Charlie's lifestyle is so odd that I don't even know how to review. It is difficult to believe that she is actually so casual about Mr. $4,000. Do people truly live that way?
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
It is odd. In her previous monologue she indicated that she liked sex. Now she is very pointedly pushing this very interested man away. Is it because she feels that it would not be casual?

Why does she hold men at a distance? What happened to make her so hardened?
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 11/7/2012
It sounds like the beginning of a beautiful friendship. Why do I have the feeling that her "prostitution" is going to come back to bite her later?

She must be gorgeous is someone pays her $4,000 a night for her (ahem) company.
The Quotidian Life chapter 24 . 8/7/2012
It's good that Cole finally got his happy ending. Well written, but again a few typos.

I love cole!

Cheers
TQL
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