Reviews for charlie
Aida Rose chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I don't know. I like how fly and butterfly rhymed. Poor crazy kid.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I don't think it's DARK, but it's definitely intriguing. I loved it. It was different and I loved the words you choose.

I would love opinions from a writer like you on my pieces. It would mean a lot!
LostInMe chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
I love the name Charlie! Sorry, I have nothing specific to say about this poem (other than the fact that it's not bad or anything). But I just had to review it because of the title!
Raining on the Halfbreed chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
that's so cool. i love it. it can be interpreted many ways, i'd like to know what you were thinking when you wrote it. it's really clever.
The association of Young Folks chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
This is interesting. I like it, and it's not THAT dark. Heh...but then again that's just me...

Great job *thumbs up*
thefuturefreaksmeout chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
i really liked this.