Reviews for A Shipwreck
wordsofjade chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Your writing is so powerful. And the way you use words is so beautiful. I could completely see the shipwreck and the bodies struggling against the surf and spray...Great job! :)
empty tea bottles chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Wow. This is rich, very soft and warm and pleasant to read. I especially like:

"Gulls, the pinpricks of restless white"

"Still, resolute, gaunt, and grim the parapet scowls

Above its lawless, grey domain,"

At some points, I felt you tried too hard to rhyme, but the fantastic imagery made up for it.
Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Absolutely exquisite word choice. The alliteration is just beautiful- it begs to be read out loud. Kudos. CD