|Reviews for A Shipwreck|
| wordsofjade chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Your writing is so powerful. And the way you use words is so beautiful. I could completely see the shipwreck and the bodies struggling against the surf and spray...Great job! :)
| empty tea bottles chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Wow. This is rich, very soft and warm and pleasant to read. I especially like:
"Gulls, the pinpricks of restless white"
"Still, resolute, gaunt, and grim the parapet scowls
Above its lawless, grey domain,"
At some points, I felt you tried too hard to rhyme, but the fantastic imagery made up for it.
| Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Absolutely exquisite word choice. The alliteration is just beautiful- it begs to be read out loud. Kudos. CD