Reviews for Salinity vs Firerain
Soul Skater 79 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
AWESOME, i love how very little happens in the story yet I'm sucked in (Please review my story)
mikey magee chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
For the Review Two Forum

I love your opening line, it presents a nice idea and on top of that it forshadows the story, and showcases the character. Very nice work!

* "towers ans spires" "ans" should be "and"

This was a nice quick read, it read well and the pacing was nice and descriptive without going overboard!

Keep writing!