WOW! That's all I can say. WOW! You are REALLY good. No, scratch that. DAMN good. This is like, a thousand times better than MY silly story. You are so talented. I love your metaphor about "Sam I Am" and everything. It's very refreshing to read something of this caliber at FFN. You are way talented, don't let any "bad reviews" get you down, all right? Man, this story is AWEsome! I can't wait for more...

This was an EXCELLENT chapter! Only one mistake: it's "Que sera, sera". It's spanish. But other than, GOD! It's like you get transported into another world. Anthony and Ben feel like real people and the way you describe things is wonderful. You are an excellent author, and I see a very good future for you! On to Ch.6...

While I'm not all about this type of love stories at all, I did think this was kind of interesting in the beginning. You're losing me now. (My favorite cousin just came out, actually, and I'm kind of wondering about this...) Anywho, good job I guess.

Wow, this is really good so far. You're a great author. I've written a novel about homosexual teens as well. It's called Pathways. I think we should chat sometime. Are you planning on continuing this anytime soon? It's very good.

Get the next part out soon! I really like this. It's great so far.

i think this story is very interesting, the descpriptions are great, beacuse they make it as if you are really there.

Ooohh oohhh write more write more! I can't wait to see what happens!

I really like this story, especially about the main characters being gay, I can definitely relate to that. Keep up with the story, I want to see what happens!

I think it's great so far. Written very well, with a lot of good detail. I'm a Christian, and I don't think homosexuality is right, but I don't think that a homosexual is to be any different from someone else. Well, that's a long topic. Email me if you want to discuss it. Again, great thus far. You are going to add more, aren't you?

i enjoyed this a lot. i hope you'll post more!