that was kinda sad...

It's a good ending. Certainly not what I expected, but that's a good thing, too. I love this story dearly, really do, and in case you ever choose to publish it, I'll buy the book.
Or any book you write, actually.
Anthony and Ben, Ben and Anthony. Gabe. Jake. Parents. Thank you for giving them to us.
I have one final question though - does the picture of Ben and Anthony you linked to in Chpt. 16 still exists? I tried the link, but it seems to be dead. I'd love to see what they look like to you.
Thank you for writing this story.

I'm starting to dislike Anthony's parents. What a pity, I had a great first impression of them. *sighs*
And I really, really hope things will get better... maybe not in the next chapter, but eventually. I hope Ben and Anthony... BenandAnthony make it through this. Really.
(oh... my last review contained spoilers. Sorry 'bout that. *fidgets*)

...
People get killed over 80$ shoes every day. I know that, but yet... this made it so much more real, somehow. It's scary.
*continues to next chapter*

*swallows hard* Not good. Very much not good. I don't think I want to see what happens next, I don't... but I've been known to have TWS at some times.
Must read on.
Ah, but before this... I like it lots. Anthony's remarks on wanting to BE gay in the last chapter were wonderful. It made me laugh out loud. Beautiful work _

that was really good, you should write about what happens the the reeves family after anthony leaves and about gabe's life as a teenager growing up with those parents 13 years later

*dies*
Brilliant. Jake-the-jackass actually managed to do something *good*! *giggles* I can't WAIT to see where this is going, therefore I will read on.
Need I say it again? Wonderful work.

I love Anthony's family. Love. It's amazing how you portray two-year-old Gabe... My cousins are just *like* that. And his parents... No stereotypical Catholic missionaries, but real, feeling people who care.
Cannot wait to see Ben's family.
Great job.

Wonderful. I totally adore this story. Must read more... I think I'll scratch my plans for sleeping early tonight. Must finish this.
Wonderful writing, wonderful characterizations, wonderful WONDERFUL story. *heart*
This is SO ending up on my fav's list.
*goes to read on*

wow i really really loved your story, just the way it made me feel everything i mean...one moment i would be up close staring at the screen thinking oh my gosh their so cute and then i would get to the end of another chapter and think i cant read on, something bads going to happen. congrats, it was great

hey, i wanted to interview a slash author for my [hopefully] up coming collumn, if ur interested add my aim: xdeadonex or email me at ...email would be easier and for the rec, this is not dissin slash or homosexuality in any way, shape or form..slash has just as much right to be her as anything... think it over...M

yay

yay! from bad comes good...

cool

Originally, this review was going to be really long, but I'm really tired and it's been a stressful day, so I'll condense it a bit
I'd give constructive criticism, but there's nothing that I, personally, would change. Everything is so well written, characters developed, everything. The only weakness of the story, was the Jake bits became slightly repetitive each time. Other than that, it's great.
Well done, this is a wonderful story and I love it.