Reviews for La Belle Dame Sans Merci
fictionalboyfriend chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Looks cool. I like the juxtaposition of the poet's flowery language and the knight's coarse determination to get completely drunk.
Carus chapter 1 . 1/2/2009

I love this so far, it's great! Such a good idea, I don't think I've seen it before.

And it will help me with revision, a bit of humour is always good :P

Fave bit: '“Why,” the knight stopped a moment, to clear his alcohol strewn thoughts, “why are you talking about squirrels?”'


Also I like the way you set it out, centered like a poem but told like a story.


zellah chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
this was great. Very funny and clever, origional idea too. i feel sorry for the poet, attemtping "poetic licence" with the cynical and intoxicated knight!

Well done.