|Reviews for Strange Voice in the Ceiling|
| Umberchild chapter 7 . 9/6/2009
This last chapter was kind of confusing, but over all it was really enjoyable! One thing I noticed is that when you describe things are right paragraphs where people are going places, you tend to just list everything that's happening.
Thanks for the cookie, by the way. :D
| Truth.Be.Told.Im.Lying chapter 7 . 9/5/2009
i just started reading this story today, and i already love it!
the narrator is hilarious!
| EnglishFreakFromHell chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Even better I'm laughing do hard I cannot breath!
| The Infamous English Freak chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
OH MY GOD THIS IS FUNNY!
| sanitary pad chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Very cute! Haha!
Have you watched Stranger Than Fiction?
| Ray-Anne chapter 6 . 7/19/2009
| Ray-Anne chapter 5 . 2/18/2009
Lol. I think I'd hate that narrator. Though it would be a semi cool thing...that is if I was tied up and drugged
| Ray-Anne chapter 4 . 2/13/2009
I *heart* still all the same. Heh
| Ray-Anne chapter 3 . 2/11/2009
Aw! Her narrator does have a heart. Lol, just kidding. It was a good chapter for the comic relief as well as good human emotions beyond that. Was happy to see an update D
| Ray-Anne chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
Seriously funny, enjoy this
| Scarlette Jane Catherine chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
Ahh this is only getting better and better. But i think you made a mistake. Jack can here the voice right? But in the beginning he can't because he thinks Sarah's talking to herself. Or does he only start hearing the voice when the go into the deli?
| Scarlette Jane Catherine chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
cute and amusing. I'm interested to see how you further this.
| Ray-Anne chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Haha! Something hilarious in the way you bring your character (in an ironic sense) to 'life'.
| Love.Is.Free chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This is entertaining XD Slightly confusing, but I look forward to reading more! It's very much like "Stranger Than Fiction", though I like it better with the narrator and the subject being aware of each other. Tis funny :D
| wavesparkle7217 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Cool. I just have one comment: Have you seen "Stranger Than Fiction?" You should before you write anymore... this sort of thing has been done.