Reviews for brainwashed and storming
wordsofjade chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
I agree! And that teacher needs to step in it. *hmph* lol I luv this poem it's so witty and the rhyming is great! :)
Besieged.Infection chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
WOW: your friend's English teacher is EVIL! . Grading the actual paper is ONE thing, but grading the brainstorm is just WRONG! The poem is cool; really reminicent of Shel Silverstein's work. He's a good poet and one of my favorites. It's was really fun to read the story, and I like how you formatted every line slightly differently and bent the rules by useing TXT TLK and replacement words instead of the usual drawls. I'm adding it to my favorites!
hunny-sweetie-darling chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Seriously? She grades the brainstorming? That's f-ed up. Stupid teachers. By the way, love the poem.