more plz

So far so good! Keep going!

Definitely off to a good start. This is far enough away from Twilight that it's got me interested. Don't get me wrong. I love all the Twilight books, but I just hope you can have your own, original plot, which seems to be what you're doing.

And your writing is good as well. Keep up the good work. I hope you don't give up on this! ]]

This is interesting and very well written. I hope to read more soon. :]