Reviews for Her Eyes, His Smile
XxSorrowsXMisfitXx chapter 13 . 8/13/2009
I loved it! cant wait for the next one! You are a really great and creative writer! and i f you are still looking for a Beta I know ppl i would do it myself but im busy with my story and Beta-ing for someone else!

But great story so far! D
nagasasu chapter 13 . 8/11/2009
Thanks for answering my review!

I was going to review when this first came out, but FP wasn't letting me. Sorry.

This chapter explains a lot about Tristan (i.e. his family not knowing about him being half-half). Interesting that now that he's met Wynn, he's had to start taking blood tablets... Hm.

Poor Tristan, stuck with a girl who doesn't believe he's in love with her. XD

My main issue is that in "I wanted to apologize (...) if you could," it felt like you were summarizing too much, so it didn't fall into Wynry's voice. After rereading that conversation, the rest of it's great; it's that one line, that makes my reader sense go off.

Oh, forgot to say I loved Wynry talking to Delilah. WAFF.
Destiny1406 chapter 13 . 8/11/2009
This story is really well written. I thought that there was someting off about Zoey, but i wasn't sure till now.

Is the mate thing kind of like the soul mate principle? Does that mean that they can never be with another? i'm kind a confused on that part.

Another thing, were the wolves that attacked Wynry werewolves too?

Just wondering for future references, but what do you mean when you say you would like a beta writer? I've read on several stories where they mention wanting one, but i've never got the meaning behind it. Can you help me understand it? Thank you!

Keep Writing and Update Soon!

Haybell! :)
Megumi Tsukazu chapter 13 . 8/10/2009
Aw. Tristan has a tame side X3 This is my favorite chapter by far. lol Love Zoey and her attitude with Tristan as well. No real questions for this chapter, pretty self explanatory, very well thought out. Liked it a bunches!

PeterMoore chapter 13 . 8/10/2009
o! they're mates!
secret reviewer chapter 13 . 8/10/2009
i'm going to be brutally honest, and this may sound like i'm flaming, but i'm not trying to. so yeah, i hope your wont be hurt after reading this, though bets are you will be.

i hate this story. alot. you have alot of potientiol (sp?) and your an amazing writer, but this story sucks. it is too much like twilight. i know stephanie myer ruined it all but still. and i hate how wynn is blind.. i have other things to say, but then it would sound like i'm rude.

Nyca chapter 13 . 8/9/2009
LOVE IT! please update soon! x))
Knowledge is Power chapter 13 . 8/9/2009
i love men like Tristan this is an awsome story
blank101 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
omg! plz update! im dying... :)!
chaos0marine chapter 13 . 8/8/2009
completely AMAZING story so far and plz plz plz plz PLZ update soon! i absolutely luv this story! D
E. Collins chapter 10 . 8/8/2009
Aw poor Tristan! This is a really good story! I like it a lot and hope I have time to finish reading it tomorrow! The plot is awesome, tho yes a little bit like twilight, but you've created beater characters I think. And I mean with a vamp/werewolf story how can't it be similar? The person has to obviously keep it hidden and the main character obviously has to find out. You've done a great job and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!


Amber R chapter 12 . 7/31/2009
I love this story so far! I'm confused about Wynry though. How does she read? I'm also confuzzled about the vampire and werewolf thing. Please explain! Update soon!
Megumi Tsukazu chapter 12 . 7/28/2009
HECK YES! Zoey is a vamp! XD Totally didn't see that coming! Can't wait to see what plays out between Wynn and Tristan. Poor Tristan D: He was collared! *le gasp* But concerning the collars, does each family have one like just in case? Or are they assigned by the council to each werewolf? Do vampires have like an equivalent to the werewolves power draining collar? I know I have so many question, but I'M SO CURIOUS! Loved the chapter!
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 12 . 7/17/2009
Well well well. I like Tristan. M...he has dark tendencies, which is attractive. Gotta love a bad guy, even if he is only semi-bad. haha. So, I like. update soon!
Noname chapter 11 . 7/15/2009
how can one have a photographic memory if they are blind?
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