Reviews for Her Eyes, His Smile
Katherine-the-greate chapter 3 . 6/2/2009
This was a good chapter. there are a few places where the wording is kinda hard to follow. but I like the chapter over all. I can see where the mom would be scared, but i don't understand what she means by 'before'/'go back'.
Katherine-the-greate chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
the thing in the library confused me here. how did she know where the seating was and, if she can read things that arent brail, could you possibly state that so that readers arent over focusing on the little stuff the entire way through the story. lol. i just get caught up on these little off details.
Katherine-the-greate chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Nice beginning. It is nice and long as well as a good hook. the cliffie was good too. :) althoug there are parts where i dont understand stuff. like, how did she find the desk and step over the backpacks?
M.Bianca chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I don't get it! she's blind, but she can find her way without problem in a crowded cafeteria, by herself?

and you keep switching between "you" and "she".

I don't want to be mean by saying this, I just want to help!
Nyca chapter 7 . 6/2/2009
hm, the chapter was okay. I thought there was going to be more action though but still okay. Goodluck at college though! :]
aferdeity chapter 7 . 6/1/2009
I really am enjoying this story. The only thing is that you make her seem like she can see sometimes and many times you make this a little twilightish, but your style is very nice. Your story is is entertaining, and I hope you update soon.
Tesco Metro chapter 7 . 6/1/2009
hmm...once, again, this is crazy-well written. However, I think things are moving really fast.

If you need a Beta, I'd love to help.
Lupita M chapter 7 . 6/1/2009
Hope U Can Update Soon! ] ] ] ]
Obsession Changes Things chapter 6 . 5/27/2009
I really liked that you decoded to do a chapter Tristans POV because it finally gives us a little bit of an insite to whats going on in that boys crazy head. At first I was all like say what he forgot that he totally ruffed her up but then you explained it and so my Say what turned into an OH! haha. Keep it up this was a good chapter. Update soon.

XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 6 . 5/27/2009
Update soon( please! ) LOVE UR STORY! )
XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 4 . 5/26/2009
Nice story! )
Yggdrasil Oak chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
Awesome! this story is great. can't wait for the next chapter!
Tesco Metro chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
you're a great writer.

but this story is really confusing. Have you considered a beta?

hopefully it'll make sense soon...
Nyca chapter 6 . 5/25/2009
Ohh, okay. Ahaha.

I am SO INTRIGUED about Wynn's Past! what happened? :]]
Tesco Metro chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
how can she read if she's blind? or know that Tristan's there?
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