This one was better. Maybe I was just distracted but I thought this one was organized a bit better and portrayed more of what you were trying to get at. I'm impressed they didn't fall into each other's arms like so many of these stories end up...

Now I'm curious for the rest of it. So, here's to weekends spent with your feet up, your clothes off, and your fingers typing.

À bientôt!

Gaki

I feel like you're writing out some of the things we just don't need to know. Kinda how when you ask a little kid what they did today they say things like: I got a knife out. I got jelly on it. I put jelly on bread. I put bread together. But really all you needed to know was that they made a sandwich.

Like I don't need to know every move Kris makes during the day or WHEN he thinks of these things he thinks of...but I'm not saying you're WRONG, there's no right way to do it, I just feel like I'm getting lost here in things I may or may not need to know.

Okay. This is Chapter 15 and I want you to do something for me real quick. Go into this chapter, hit Ctrl, F. Type "Needless to say" and I think you'll understand what I thought about this chapter.

If something didn't happen in a class, you don't have to mention it. I don't care about what his schedule is nor do I have to hear about how nothing happened.

aw... that was really sweet, especially the teasing about bed privileges.

-whacks head off of pinata panda- HELLS YEAH! -flails around blindfolded with an aluminum baseball bat-

AWW! They're too cute. -huggles chibis of dem- Kris's parents need to find them or something. How would they react? XD Let's find out. Will we find out some point in this story? lolz... X3

YAY! You finaly updated :D This chapter was cute, hahaha I made you write? what ever do you mean? I only reminded you once ;] heheheh well goodluck with school and cant wait for the next chapter

xD Haha its a good thing you updated now, I was about to begin bitchin' at you. Your lucky xP Anyways OMG finally lol! I

HEY! *Nudge* *Nudge* helo! I know you didnt forget your wonderfully awesome readers. But I'm starting to think you did :( please please please please update

AW! -squeals- SO CUTE!

Hey look, gay hookers! :D

THAT MADE ME SO HAPPY! -huggles Robert and Kris- SO CUTE! -rolls around floor in glee-

And Vick's gay. Haha. Ha. Haa... Yeah...Kinda creepy...-kicks Vick- So I can't WAIT for your next update, because there will be more hookers and caek- I MEAN... Yummy boy kissy kissy cute-ness... ness... :I Update fast or I'll spam you with reviews on deviantart. :3 Wuv yew! :D

O.M.G ok so that chapter freaking rocked!I wasnt expecting anything like that but it was great and shocking I love this story please update as soon as possible.

p.s: HAVE FUN IN DISNEYWORLD! it rocks!

Great chapter.

So did not see how it was going to end. I was all excited and then I was like "Oh no" how could this be happening.

Well done. Enjoy Disney World.

Rae.

xD Finally xD I so happy! Teehe I love Robert 8D he's awesomely bad-ass! And Kris is just...well...Kris! And He's awesome too!

OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS STORY. IT SO DAMN FUNNY I LOVE IT mORe MORE DO NOT STOP AH I WANT MORE. RAWR OR I WILL EaT U

And then the hooker jumps out of the cake.

:D Anyway, great chappie, but the next one's going to be better because it will have yummy boy love in it. NOW GO! Write, you little person, you! :D

Needless to say, I want more xD And soon, that would be nice...But, ya know, If you dont have time, you dont have time. Ah Im so excited xDD Im in love with both of them, and Miles xD He's just...awesome!