Reviews for Raves and Rebels
12eafggdsg chapter 10 . 8/14/2009
This story just gets better and better. We had some Miles in this chapter! Yay. xD For some reason I seem to have developed a weird fascination for Vick even though he's so horrible. Lol. I can't believe he burnt Kris on the neck in history! T_T That must've hurt like a bitch! Wow. All Kris's friends seem to really hate Rob! It's cute that they are concerned for Kris's safety. ""Uh, hi, Robby," Trevor smirked as Robert visibly bristled.

"It's Rob," He said between clenched teeth.

"Oh, right. I'll remember that next time," Trevor said, crossing his arms over his chest. Kris resisted the urge to face palm himself." - For some reason I found that bit hilarious! xD Oh and this chapter was uber-long! I LOVE it! xDxD Anyway keep up the excellent work and update soon! I really can't wait for the next chapter!
RainbowDinosaur chapter 9 . 8/9/2009
Loved it hope you update soon.
12eafggdsg chapter 9 . 8/7/2009
Great chapter! Kris is starting to realise his crush on Robert.

Yay! And I guess Vick doesn't seem to be getting any nicer... :( Oh well, I'm sure he has his reasons! xD I'm looking forward to the next history lesson! I really want to see what happens. :)) Anyway keep up the good work and update soon. I can't wait!
Elizabeth K chapter 8 . 8/4/2009
Where is Rob?

By the way,I'm still here lol.
12eafggdsg chapter 8 . 8/4/2009
I love this story! You are doing a great job writing it! :D Poor Kris! Vulf does not seem like the nicest guy in the world... (a bit of an understatement there...) and Kris will have to endure a year of being stuck in the same class as him. Thats got to suck! But hey! Maybe Vick isn't as horrible as he seems...? (Even though he did burn Kris... But Robert saved him! Kyaa! That was so cute. Sorry, I'm getting off topic...) This Miles guy seems cool though! I hope there will be more of him in future chapters. :D Anyways I decided to review because of the authors note at the end of the chapter. Dont worry. Your readers are very much alive and well. Even if nobody else reviews, I am your dedicated reader and from this chapter on your dedicated reviewer! xD I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one! :):) Please update soon and keep up the good work! xD
Samantha chapter 5 . 7/1/2009
Did you make Xzavier from Bloodkey the Janitor...omg I laughed so hard at that. Vampire-to-Janitor...anyway..
TERMINATED chapter 5 . 6/16/2009
Xzavier? BLOODKEY!
TERMINATED chapter 4 . 6/16/2009
Andres? From Chi...
TERMINATED chapter 2 . 6/16/2009
Hm, the brothers from Chi and Ghost from BloodKey :).
Goldenstars chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
I love in Australia.

Do you know what tim tams are?

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aww...

cute gay guy moment

made me smile :)

grr sexual tension

I went to just scream at Kris 'you're gay, accept it and go make out with Robbie boy'

good job !
Lasagna Lad chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
I love stuff like this. Just don't play too much into the stereotype of Robert being a bad-boy! Keep it up.
Goldenstars chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
I have a question.

Do you actually say 'cut class' in America. Not wag or skip?

And yous have mixed year classes and different lunch times.

Damn l'm jealous.

Mexican german teacher? nice.

But I have to say I agree with Kris, theres something about abs that is delicious. lol.
JDWrites chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
Rawr rawr rawr. I'm happy with your descriptions but I can't say I'm too happy with the subject. It sounds very much like one of those random casual stories that you just kind of whip out so you could live a small fantasy. I get a little antsy about the unrealistic-ness of some stories, so you're going to have to get to the "good part" soon or me and other readers are probably going to get bored.
JDWrites chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Agh, it took me a little bit to find the review button, I hate when FP screws this shit up. Anyways, I shall review, because that is what I do.

Well, for a first chapter it's quite well done, despite it being quite short, which you have clearly addressed at the bottom as intentional. Your description of the school from an outer perspective could have been better but I got what you meant anyway. Your description of his character from an outer perspective is nice, the rainbow colors everywhere, his demeanor as he walks into the school. Now all we need is a subtle description of what he thinks of himself and you'll have fully communicated your character. Then it's on to development. I enjoy this so far, keep it up.

Your writing style is nothing special but it's not bad, I urge you to keep this up.

Gaki
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