Oops. In reference to that last review: I wasn't being critical of ur story. Obviously it's very popular. It's my reading ability I'm being critical of. I can't get into a story with multiple characters, or an intricate plot, or a strange setting. I'm the Forrest Gump of reading.

JD Fly

You'll want to delete this review, possibly b4 reading it. I'm trying to write an angel story, so I'm researching some. This one isn't quite my cup of tea. I prefer Earl Grey. Ur penname also caught my attention. I'm a UK fan. That's University of Kentucky. Soon to be this year's NCAA Champs.

JD Fly

Wow.

Just wow.

This is one of the best pieces of fiction I have ever read on this website. This is one of the best stories I have ever read on the internet. This is one of the best things I have ever had the pleasure of reading in my life.

Sorry if that sounded melodramatic but goddamn that was good. Your prose is simply amazing, the cast believable and the story riveting and always had me wondering from beginning to end. That said I'd have liked it if you had made it a little clearer when there was a change in perspective, suddenly hopping from A to B was rather jarring and I often had to re-read the lines several times before I understood that you'd changed it, perhaps a larger gap when you do that would make things much easier for the reader to, well, read.

Still, fantastic story, it's a shame you've only submitted the one here (and an even bigger shame that the story ended if I'm being completely honest).

Bravo. Magnificent job.

wow freaking amazing! i was so confused the whole time until the very end and it was amazing! i just couldnt stop reading! :)

That, was what I call the product of a brilliantly magnificent writer. You are amazing, and I wish you had many more stories, but this is the only one I see. Perhaps there is on your other site. Oh hey, there you go. I shall now leave to read your other stories. One thing I don't really understand is how Mr Warwick is paying for the Angels so stay with him.

Wow, simply amazing. I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more reveiws. This is definatly in my top three ever! Good luck and keep writing.

I'm a sucker when it comes to Science fiction. Loved this story, absolutely a favorite and i will most likely read it again.

I LOVED IT! This has got to be the best story I have ever read on here. have you considered getting it published? I think it would be a hit and could possibly turn into a movie. will there be more stories posted on here? wow! I absolutely loved it. don't ever stop writing u weere made for it!

o now it makes sense why maggie was promised to Jim. I still don't like the idea but I can live with it as long as she lives! and dan can't forget about him. great chapter! I will pick back up tomorrow.

:O that is so wrong! why Jim? why not zachery? hell why not someone else... why jim? that is so not right! :( ok next chapter

great chapter but one question...if everyone knows what about the angel project then why can't they talk about it?

ok u have turned me into furistic romances. I am interested not only for the sex but the plot is really good. I want to know more about the Angels. I will review once I finish reading for the night.

ok ineed to voice my concerns now. I am not one to get into futuristic stories. every one I have tried to read has been a large letdown. so far I am into it but not but I will continue to read for the first ten chapters after that then I will know if I will stick with it or leave it. unless u tell me the chapter I need to read to to fall in love with it so far ur writing style and usage of words are great!

story was amaizing! Nice work, this is the second time I've read it,and I enjoyed it!

I've just finished this story in one sitting, and all I have to say is:

Wow.