Reviews for Once Upon A Nightmare
rynnzy chapter 21 . 10/18/2011
I'm glad to see you've come back from your mission (that's what I'm assuming you went on)! I hope it was wonderful :) This story is absolutely amazing. And I can't tell you how GRATEFUL I am that you left it up! It's truly a pleasure to reread and reacquaint myself with these awesome characters. I'll comment on the revised chapters as soon as you get them up. Your work is absolutely one to keep tabs on.
Sariah H chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Can I just say that you are officially amazing. And I missed you. And you make me want to start writing again. I've been checking your blog and was like "O...Kell...I have missed you" Hope all is going well girly and also-Publish Once Upon A Nightmare already. It's phenomenal. You are so imaginative and wonderful.
ErBeBr chapter 22 . 8/18/2011
Miss Jak,

Thank you so much for leaving this story up. I greatly enjoyed it. You are very imaginative and of course witty. I love the depths to which you developed this story. I wish it would just keep going!

Thank you again, Happy writing.

MidniteLayce chapter 22 . 8/14/2011
Wow, I don't even know where to begin. I've been devouring your story for the last 2 days and have enjoyed every minute immensely. :) It's definitely going on my fav list, and I felt that you deserved to know how much I loved Once Upon a Nightmare- even if it's just in a simple review.

First off, the world. Magical and genius, it was wonderful to explore along with Violet. My inner child was wishing it were true (Okay, okay- so it wasn't just my inner child. haha). You provided just enough details written beautifully for my imagination to grab ahold of and run with it. It was fresh and original and- like I said before- magical. :)

The characters! I fell in love with basically all of them. lol Violet was an amazing heroine in my book- loyal and strong and loving and wonderfully quirky and sarcastic. I just adored her. :) Alexander was deliciously amazing. Haha His personality made me laugh, and I wish I had one of my own to haunt my dreams. ;) Armand was simply wonderful in every way. His character probably intrigued me the most, and I desperately want to know how he fares in the sequel. Genn I really liked, Gloom I adored (his death was beyond saddening to me, and I suspected it as soon as Violet got moments with his power), and Sweeney I both feared and particulary liked (haha).

Plot! Fantastic! :D I noticed a few cliches, but I didn't even mind them because you wrote the scenes in such a way that they were always charming and entertaining- not overdone. Your writing style in general made me jealous. Lol The dialogue was always witty and the narration through Violet's eyes clearly showed your talent. :)

And now I'm just hungry for more of your work! I know you won't be back for a while, but I'll be eagerly awaiting a sequel when you do. Consider me a loyal fan! :D

~ MidniteLayce
Ceri Anne chapter 22 . 8/9/2011
This story is just phenomenal! It has got to be one of the best I have read on fiction press. Your writing is so witty and beautiful, you've had me laughing out loud throughout the entire thing! You have also made me want an Alexander to visit me in my sleep ;) I hope you do write a sequel to this, it's just not fair to leave us hanging like this. Also, as much as I love this story, I long for a happy ending. You've pulled a Philip Pullman on us all and I am not impressed! Hopefully I will get an alert pretty soon (I seem to have discovered this story about a year and a half after it was finished... hint hint...)
ruimargrida chapter 22 . 7/12/2011
I just finished this, and it's absolutely delightful. A unique and refreshing plot, this story sucks you in, and the characterization and descriptions are all spot on. So basically, I think this story rocks my socks off.

The main little bit about the story that could be improved would be more exploration of emotions. Alex was pretty closed off, and there could have been more intimate interaction between them before setting off on the journey to the portal. Also, in the tenser and more dramatic scenes such as her death, had there been more description to evoke emotion, the chapter would have been brilliant.

This story is complex, there's so many parts to it from the alternate dream world, the war, the romance and it's all so intriguing, I think this is more suitable to become a series. I really can't wait to read the sequel, I'm sure it's going to be fantastic as well. Is the sequel going to be from Violet's point of view? I really hope so, because with that ending, Violet and Alex aren't really finished yet! Anyways, I'm talking a bit too much, can't wait to see the sequel, and I hope you have a great time on your mission!
Love Rhymes With chapter 22 . 7/5/2011
How exciting! A sequel, you say? Well, I just cannot wait. I wasn't too thrilled with the ending, but that could just be that I didn't want to stop reading this story, what with all these amazing and intense characters. Amazing job! Probably my favorite story I've read in a long while :)
Love Rhymes With chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
Golly, I just love love love this story so far! Everything is so vivid and unique. Love the characters. Kudos on the excellent story-telling. I don't think I'm going to be getting much sleep tonight-I'll probably be reading this for the next few hours. Oh well :)
WinterxXxKiss chapter 22 . 6/28/2011
This has got to be the most original story I have ever read in my life, and I read ALOT. Like...Violet Darcey alot...

I look forward to the sequal and if this ever ended up as a movie...I would die happy XD

Thank you for writing this marvelous story. :)
Sophia Alexandra chapter 5 . 6/26/2011
this story keeps getting better
Sophia Alexandra chapter 3 . 6/26/2011
great chapter! im loving the story so far
Sophia Alexandra chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
this is really good. cant wait to read more!
Sophia Alexandra chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
i thought this was really good. if you could check out my story too paranormal agency id appreciate it. thanks!
kiwi.boba chapter 22 . 6/18/2011

YAYYYY! Can't wait for it!
Jazzy Soul chapter 21 . 5/31/2011
You... You... YOU TEASE!

I'm going to your profile right now, and if there isn't another story, I think I'm going to have to be mad at you...

I adore this story in every way. Just saying.
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