|Reviews for Once Upon A Nightmare|
| Kikinii chapter 23 . 3/5/2014
:/ I feel like you slightly butchered this story from what it used to be. I hope you kept a copy of the original pages of this story because this new version that you wrote isnt nearly as good... The romance is sloppy and rushed in this version, Alexander and Armand arent as cool... And then you killed off gloom which is just sad... What happened to that fruit that violet ate that would play off of her emotions and make her act strange... Or the insinuated romance between her and alexander with armand thrown into the mix? Or when violet fitst met Alexanders dad and mom and she tried making alexander tell them who she really was? (That part was hilarious) I barely laughed during this new re read ( maybe chuckled twice) and idk I kind of dont even want to read past this chapter because its all just bleh. I do hope you at least kept the original copy of this story, it used to be one of my favorites.
| Kikinii chapter 2 . 2/28/2014
I like your old, original chapters better... They were more fun. :(
| Angels Have Faith chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
sounds interesting, will read it.
| some reader chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Holy shit. I preferred reading your book over the one I'm assigned to read in English right now (sorry Crime and Punishment, I'll come for you later), and this was a read I couldn't put down. I haven't felt the magic that I felt while reading for a very long time, and this was truly amazing. You created an entirely new world with new technology and concepts that I've fell completely in love with and really wish to live in.
It's only been in the back of my mind until now, but I think you've just inspired me to write my own stories now. Thank you so much for writing this piece. It was very, very magical.
| anon chapter 24 . 1/30/2014
I love it :D
| CocoBunni96 chapter 25 . 1/19/2014
*sobs because that was amazing*
| Meli Sand chapter 24 . 1/12/2014
This is beautiful. I'm in love. Like, I can't find words for it. Every character was so unique, and I couldn't hate a single one of them. Gloom was my favorite; that scene was heartbreaking. Don't even get me started on the plot. Each revelation was like a punch in my gut-a good one, if that even exists. Definitely, definitely reading the sequel. You should let us know if you ever manage to release a print version. XD Keep writing your wonderful stories.
| BrookV chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I just want you to know how glad I clicked on your story! You never know whether a book's quality is great with just the summaries, especially this site being mostly amateur writers. You took me on such an emotional rollercoaster, and there was never a point in the story that I thought that a character was annoying. Although Donovan was a dick, he still belonged, and character development is a huge thing for me. Not to be a total gusher or anything, I just think you should know that it was such a jem to read, and I can't thank you enough for following through and ending it so well! It makes me cringe when I find a good story and the author doesn't finish it. Just one question though, is Violet's inner flame her connection to Alexander, or is it her livelihood. I had a bit of trouble piecing that out. Thanks again :)
| BrandiFlakes chapter 24 . 12/11/2013
This was an AMAZING story! I loved every second of it! Your writing is really good, and I can't wait for a sequel (if you're going to put one up).
| EGB chapter 8 . 12/4/2013
Quick word here, I believe to say that one is not afraid, one would say, "Je n'ai pas peur." I could be wrong, but I doubt it.
| Random Reviewer chapter 24 . 11/12/2013
I really enjoyed this story! I hope you post the sequel :D
| Skylar chapter 24 . 11/11/2013
Please please please oh my gosh please put the sequel up, I will spend every cent I have for it, stories like these are hard to come by, so PLEASE put it up!
| MileyRowling chapter 24 . 11/11/2013
This is the best story I've ever read on this site! I can't wait for book two!
| mia.amelie chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Hi. This is musicbox under a different name. I realized that fictionpress managed to take my email out of my comments. It's a gmail account, and the different name I used for this comment is the name of that gmail you can contact me by if you're still looking for a beta tester.
| Drierwor chapter 24 . 11/5/2013
I must say this is truly a wonderful story to read. The use of Nigthmares and Dreams was very original and is what caught my attention. Thank you again for the amazing read.