|Reviews for Once Upon A Nightmare|
| SweetHeartCandy chapter 24 . 9/21/2013
Oh my gosh...the end! D; I truly loved this story and every one of the characters just grew so close to my heart. You have so much talent in writing, and I can't wait for the sequel:)
| Nikkome Konno chapter 24 . 9/21/2013
There's going to be a sequel. And it's on Amazon. And you have a debut novel.
I-I'm going to read all of them. Yes. Yes I am.
I really loved this story. I truly did. I wish you luck on your novel!
| xosabrina chapter 24 . 9/21/2013
I loved this story so much. I can't wait for the sequel to come out! Hopefully it'll be within a month & not six. I love Alex & her together. I'm hoping they get together in the sequel(:
| kiwi.boba chapter 24 . 9/21/2013
Yay! Team Armand! Hahaha, I can't wait for the sequel. I hope that you'll be able to update it as often as you did for this one. I'll be waiting impatiently!
| WantsMore chapter 23 . 9/20/2013
"There are negative effects, but it isn't going to wipe them out. At least not yet. As years go by and more and more people use BlissMax, the worse it will get. But that issue won't be solved . . . at least in this book [dun dun]."
-You, Author's Note, Chapter 18
So does this mean you'll be writing more about Violet and the remaining Ira clan?
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/19/2013
I had originally bought the first and second book off of Amazon so I wasn't sure if I should read it again here, but you have improved this story so much! :) Your writing has gotten a lot better and I am really enjoying reading this again. :) Are you going to make this version availible on Amazon too? Cause I would love to buy this new and improved one. :) Can't wait to see how it ends! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| GoldenEyedFury chapter 23 . 9/19/2013
oh my god! I am so in love with this, and by proxy you, will you marry me? hahaha stalker moment over onto the review. So far I am enjoying reading this, i can hardly wait for the next chapter and really hope you post it soon. (like today...today would be awesome)
| Nikkome Konno chapter 22 . 9/17/2013
Once again, too lazy to log in :P sorry
I love how Alexander can be thoroughly irritating, then sweet/bittersweet, then to just plain being...Alexander. He IS hard to like, and I enjoy how you made it so that he is. Normally authors try to make all their characters likable despite the situations and events, but you didn't and I think that's the part about Alexander I like most.
| alkonost chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
First of all, why does alex resent vi? No u don't get to resent her, whatever she did its survival instincts okay. Ur lucky enough she's not abusing the commands if it were me I'd command you to stop being a dick.
Oh so jack decided to kill her anyways...well good choice though you really didn't need to kill yourself along. Is jack's death really necessary? UGH damn jack I like youu why you gotta dieeee
All this alexander shiz is really complicated huh. I mean alex is complicated. I don't really get what he wants and I'm guessing he's confused himself and now that he's king, he's all the more perplexed. Its like his two (or maybe 9 bc this is alex we're talking about) consciousness is fighting each other. Oh the dilemma...
But wait wait waitttt since alex is the king then why can't he just send vi back through the stitch of time? Unless...he doesn't know that OR he doesn't want to save her? If its the latter then ALEX YOU BaSTARD I SWEAR I'LL COME TO CHIMERA MYSELF AND uh do something bad to you and stuff SO THAT BETTERNO T BE WHY DAMNIT ok I get it (sortof) that u won't be binded if she dies but how selfish can u be omg she's here in the first place because of yoU so get your sh i t together alex GET IT TOGETHER. YOU TO VI. Alex wasn't gonna kill himself okay so u didn't need to stop him from killing donovan and lana (maybe lana s fine) I get you're the protagonist and all but donovan is just ugh. He even left lana! Whose been loyal to him.
And armand. Armand oh armand. I don't like youfghjswhjsa. You're too good to be true dammit. Night terror or not I think he's just too good for vi. And vi is too good for alex. WHAI. Wait no. No one is too good for anyone. They're bad for each other.
p.s. I literally laughed when lana said that donovan is the joy of humans' dreams of guardian angels. The irony.
p.s.s. Too late to go to rehab for hina she dead
p.s.s.s. Someone get vi a sandwich
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 16 . 9/14/2013
I think Alexander is a good person; he couldn't have left her there without the intent to rescue her?
Oh, and once again... brilliant chapter. :D
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 14 . 9/14/2013
Aah, I can't believe this is happening... what's going to happen to everyone? And ugh, I seriously do not like Donovan right now. Jeez, how backstabbing can you get? I mean, a knife to her neck? And he said he'd help her! But I guess he has his reasons...
You know what, this story just keeps getting better and better. :)
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 13 . 9/14/2013
Did she really decide to join up with Donovan? :OOO
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 12 . 9/14/2013
This was the best chapter yet. :)) Do I detect a potential love triangle? Ha ha, I don't know. :PP
| alkonost chapter 20 . 9/14/2013
No way. Is jack going to release hina, or even worse- take her place?! WHAT what is going on I'm baffled oh god
Jacks words to armand is probably "take care of your brother" or something sigh I kind of feel bad for armand even though considering the fact that he's a freakin night terror that can shift and OHMYGOD armand is like mystique! Even better, he can mimic their powers too. Which is awesome and yet he was sort of a shadow of alexander. And that sucks.
Oh jack, you promised you wouldn't kill her. YOU promised. If you let someone else kill her, her death isn't on your hands. She dies, you don't break your promise. Win win. But nooooo you just had to emprison her. But if jack is either dead or 'gone' (I hope not) then alex or armand or anyone could kill her (BUT wHAT IF JaCK TOLD ARMAND To PROmISE NoT TO KILL HINA OR TO NOT LET ALEX KILL HinA?ok jacks words might not even be close to this but I'm just guessing and my imaginayions when its given a cliff hanger goes sky rocket to pluto).
The dreams need to know what their queen really is. And not know her by the words of someone who is blindly (I'm guessing) in love with her.
Also, too much joy can result to insanity which is why good isn't always good (lol if that made sense at all).
Anywayss as always, have a great day! That was a great update!
p.s. I think hina needs rehab. I can assume she already know that her (THEIR) mother's death isn't jack's fault but she's turned a blind eye to the truth and is just blaming jack as a way of closure and its easier to blame someone when someone you love is lost (when anything bad happens actually). But if she doesn't know then someone needs to tell her asap and knock some sense into her.
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 9 . 9/14/2013
THIS. IS. SO. AWESOME.