Reviews for Smudge
felicia13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Powerful ending. "It’s as if I don’t think about you half as much." I really love that.

A simple, yet extremely effective emotional snapshot. Quite touching in its simplicity, really.

I also love the images of these pictures and poems that so much time was spend on, trying to get everything just right, suddenly just going up in smoke and flame. Very poignant.

Felicia.
Dehydrated Hyena chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Makes me smile, Sunday.

Odd rhythm, which I appreciate. I like the change in tone with the fire. It kind of peters out towards the end, though.

Still, overall very interesting.