|Reviews for Dido|
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 9/30/2010
"You should never fall in love with me." hmm, perhaps from A Walk to Remember? I love that line, so, no critiques.
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
you keep having tense changes, (he does - he did). it's something you need to work on (for future stories because you already completed this one)