|Reviews for Courage|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
"my words were always wordless, weren’t?"... I think you mean meaningless, not wordless and also it should be weren't they
"deep down, I wished my “I love you” was true…"... Deep
"every thing" is actually everything
I like how its repetitious, but you're always saying something different. That was really great. I also liked the idea, it was interesting and very bittersweet.
| Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
"I just decided to start a journey without you,/and without you means… Just me,/I just decided to leave for real." Quite impowering words! In a relationship in which one feels traped, unwanted, and unloved one manages to find the streangh and of course the courage to say "I've had enough!" 'Tis a wonderful poem that most readers will easily identify with. Well done! I truely enjoyed this piece )
| Natalie-Rayne chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
"When you watch the sky at night,
just watch me and I'll shine for you,
let me lead your way..."
| I be a poet lost in morbidity chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
I really like it. well done, its great.
| Isca chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
"My words were always wordless." Profound!
"It'll be a memory I won't cherish." I love the honest/sharp tone here!
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
A beautiful poem.
I like the line “I’m the smallest and brightless star
you wished on”. That is very poetic.