Reviews for New Thing
Casey213 chapter 13 . 4/6/2013
Yes! The break up-now please give my heart what it wants and bring them together! :) The story is very good, its definitely keeping me interested!
Casey213 chapter 10 . 4/5/2013
I love your story, first time reviewing in 10 chapters but hey I'm finally getting around to it :) I think the characters are intriguing I just her to dumb her fiance and for them to get together already!
violet-eyez chapter 25 . 1/8/2012
can't wait for the next chapter
Rhiannon chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
I really like your concept but I have one thing which I have to say. Your constant use of the word slut. The word itself does not offend me but there are so many different words that can be used as well as slut. You used it 7 times in this chapter alone.
totalbookworm chapter 24 . 8/1/2011
I have to be honest with you, this chapter's ending was a tad anti-climactic but I can't wait to read the next chapters. Please update real soon.
totalbookworm chapter 10 . 7/31/2011
Hi, I really like this story. I haven't read the first version though but I'm guessing Jonathan and Chloe will end up together ). I'm loving this chapter, they're friends now and seem to be unaware that they like each other more than they think they do. I'm off to read the next chapters now.
violet-eyez chapter 24 . 5/20/2011
can't wait for the next chapter
Aneesha chapter 23 . 8/19/2010
Aw such a cute chapter :)

lol what a adorable fight

haha I actually thought Jonathan ran ot because he thought she was cheating on him, good thing to know though that he would let Chloe explain something liike that and notjusg walk out on her :)

good chapter!
sappyromancelvr chapter 23 . 8/19/2010

They are adorable together.
L. Valdez chapter 10 . 8/19/2010
Aw, this story is adorable. I'm not too fond of Peter, and I'm guessing you don't want us to be P Can't wait to keep reading and see where this goes!


AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 22 . 3/13/2010
Finally! I'm glad we know the story now and that more family has come into play! Anyhow, I hope you update soon! That wait was excruciating! I'm kidding :)
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 20 . 12/2/2009
They're so cute as a couple...anyhow! Can't wait to see how working together goes..update soon!
Masked Ducky chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
Sorry I haven't reviewed in what seems forever. College is starting to get the best of my free time. I have enjoyed the last couple chapters, because Chole and Jonathan are great together. This was a nice update.
Joanna chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
this was a fantastic story, i was really hooked from the first page! i loved it, when can we have some more of it? thanks for writing such a cute story hun!
Miss Carly chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
Thanks for the update! :) It was another great chapter!
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