Reviews for New Thing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! The break up-now please give my heart what it wants and bring them together! :) The story is very good, its definitely keeping me interested! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, first time reviewing in 10 chapters but hey I'm finally getting around to it :) I think the characters are intriguing I just her to dumb her fiance and for them to get together already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() I really like your concept but I have one thing which I have to say. Your constant use of the word slut. The word itself does not offend me but there are so many different words that can be used as well as slut. You used it 7 times in this chapter alone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to be honest with you, this chapter's ending was a tad anti-climactic but I can't wait to read the next chapters. Please update real soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I really like this story. I haven't read the first version though but I'm guessing Jonathan and Chloe will end up together ). I'm loving this chapter, they're friends now and seem to be unaware that they like each other more than they think they do. I'm off to read the next chapters now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw such a cute chapter :) lol what a adorable fight haha I actually thought Jonathan ran ot because he thought she was cheating on him, good thing to know though that he would let Chloe explain something liike that and notjusg walk out on her :) good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) They are adorable together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this story is adorable. I'm not too fond of Peter, and I'm guessing you don't want us to be P Can't wait to keep reading and see where this goes! Thanks, L.V. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! I'm glad we know the story now and that more family has come into play! Anyhow, I hope you update soon! That wait was excruciating! I'm kidding :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're so cute as a couple...anyhow! Can't wait to see how working together goes..update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I haven't reviewed in what seems forever. College is starting to get the best of my free time. I have enjoyed the last couple chapters, because Chole and Jonathan are great together. This was a nice update. |
![]() ![]() this was a fantastic story, i was really hooked from the first page! i loved it, when can we have some more of it? thanks for writing such a cute story hun! |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the update! :) It was another great chapter! |