|Reviews for Eternal Struggles|
| frogs of war chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Very funny. We all know someone who seems Chaos incarnate. Great story.
BTW, your italics didn't italicize.
| Le Cosmonaute chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
This was a really interesting idea, and you wrote it nicely.
| Jessie My Love chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
This was really well written. There could've been more description here and there, but it still flowed nicely~
I did notice a few typos here and there, so I do suggest going back and editing your work. But overall this was really good.
-Jessie m p.s. pay it forward