|Reviews for The Zif And I|
| Uncle-Al2 chapter 4 . 2/27/2009
A little disjointed, and I don't mean the flashbacks. All in all though, it's a great story, with good characters and a strong plot. Thanks
| yyyehh chapter 4 . 2/8/2009
Wow. This chapter was possibly my favourite..
I've been re-reading it over for quite some time. The tension is there, and that's what his pain believable and hauls me in. I couldn't get enough. Yet, the part where Dann and Leia parted ways really grabbed hold of me.
I was listening to a song 'Patience' which talks of parting, while I read it, and it moved me the most.
I'm proud of you.
| yyyehh chapter 3 . 2/8/2009
Dann's come back. :)
I really like the stories Dann tells Daniel. It's thoughtful that he tries to be a grandfather despite not having a good clue how to be one. Great work.
| MollyCW chapter 4 . 1/7/2009
And this time my review is official, cuz I've finally got an account!
One question... Will Myra ever come back into the story? I liked her.
Best story ever!
| Molly chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
This time, I'll leave my first correction...
when you write a number, your supposed to spell it all out, unless it's a date or money.