Reviews for Beautiful Passing
ChronoSurge1776 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Oh my god. This story has changed my night. I had no idea I would be so emotionally moved when I read it, but your narration is excellent. A lot of people may assume that this lost object that drove the Narrator to suicide is a lost relationship, but to me, I think you left that aspect ambiguous on purpose. It could be the loss of a family member or friend through death that drove his/her emotions to killing themselves. That line you have towards the end "I'll always love you." is very haunting. It's almost like the lone chorus of the poem. The narration is very poetic and dark, I LOVE IT!