|Reviews for Accidents Happen|
| DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
i like the emotion in this, irritated and haughty like. it tells the reader that something bad probably happened that was caused by the speaker of the poem.
i also like how the last line is. just the word "sometimes" bolded. it gives the feeling that the speaker might have done whatever happened on purpose instead of accidently, but we'll never know..so it's kinda mysterious too
nice work ]
| Carus chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
I liked the 'Sometimes' in bold and italics at the end, I think that it reinforced the point well.
I found it a bit odd that you had lineline 1 sentence twice, and then you had
I’ve got news for you,
accidents just happen.'
with a comma at the end. I think it would work better if you kept the structure the same the whole way through, and to be honest, it works better as two sentences instead of just one anyway, I think. Too many commas detract from the flow.