|Reviews for Shadow Net|
| TooTall chapter 54 . 5/19
53 chapters down and enjoying almost every word. The typos are a pain to pedants like me, coming across errors like 'feat' instead of 'feet' is like instant toothache but hell, do not let my fragile sensibilities hold you back. I am in for the long haul. There is nothing like a well thought out epic story and yours hits those buttons. Thank you for your work.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
I was reading this a year ago, I can't remember why I stopped, got up to chapter 50 something and now imma start again, I remember it was awesome, a year later and I still have the word pictures in my mind of this amazing world you've made, and you always wrote the characters with integrity, everything feels real and I love it, I hope I catch up this time
| damn chapter 30 . 12/6/2015
you are one heck of a author with an extremely weak body(you were nearly in every 1-2chapters sick)
hope you are still fine and are living healthy
i like the story so far very much and hope there wont be a 3rd time where the team gets taken down and imprisoned
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/13/2015
I love this story. I just want to say that :). Keep up the good work :)
| Dynamatic chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Nice start, though there is one recurring grammar mistake that annoys me; allot should be a lot. Allot is a word, though it has nothing to do with what you mean.
| Sapphireleaf chapter 71 . 2/11/2015
I was the guest that reviewed a few chapters ago. "They were a small group or people separate from Fall and the independents. Labeled a cult for believing in worlds and beings alien to Danth. That any day these aliens could invade their world. I know, right? Where do they come up with this stuff? Crazy fairy tales!"
Wouldn't they be looking into this just in case? Just wondering. Great sense of humor.
| Guest chapter 67 . 2/11/2015
Slam-faxi... "Ly"s and "Markie"s... Darth Corliss... I read a few paragraphs and burst out laughing. This is a very fufiling read. It's the longest one I have seen. Three days of binge reading and I only get 20-25 chapters done a day. This is an impressive piece of work. The slowness of the plot can be aggravating. There are some spelling mistakes. The plot is fun though, and the other worlds are interesting.
| TimDitch chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
| Jason Bloom chapter 4 . 8/10/2014
The character created here seems a little bit more whiney and over exaggerated that absolutely necessary. If he was created as a super soldier, oughtn't he have the patience and training to deal with a minor amount of what is barely even feasible as "psychological trauma?"
Otherwise an interesting and intriguing concept.
| Jason Bloom chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
Please learn the difference between allot and a lot. It's pretty massive and should not be ignored.
| Jason Bloom chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
| Comocosews chapter 86 . 8/10/2014
You can always get someone to edit spelling and wording. These two books and the miniseries show the work of an author that deserves to be read by many. They will enjoy the read!
| Krenaya chapter 9 . 8/10/2014
Mostly no mistakes for this chapter, save for two.
In one sentence you put, "We had know way of knowing." I d believe that you meant, "no" for the first "know".
When Clou says, "I guess everybody is we me." Perhaps you meant, "with me".
| Krenaya chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
Well, so far things are looking better as far as mistakes go.
I got about 1/3 of the way down the page before encountering a mistake that I hadn't already brought up previously. "Defiant" is not concrete, it is "bold resistance". You most likely meant, "definitely". This is a more common mistake I find when reading stories on FictionPress.
Once again, "barley" is a grain, one that you can make a variety of alcoholic drinks with if you don't use it for baking and "barely" is "only just/almost not".
You forgot to put a space between "her" and "again" in the sentence, "Adosh nodded to her again before turning towards the subwoofer machines."
I also don't think that bugs are "trilingual" and speak three languages. I do believe that you meant, "triangular" when describing that crazy large millipede/arachnid bug.
| Krenaya chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
. . .on the topic of things that seem to have a re-occuring pattern, I respectfully request that you please fix any and all of your "fallows", unless you are describing a deer or a field in fallow, to "follow".
". . .if we can't even use our own to feat. . ." is incorrect, "feet" however, is. "Feat", an accomplishment is not the plural form of the extremities upon which you walk on.
"Cloths" are squares of cloth used for cleaning purposes while "clothes" are for wearing.
A tip on commas, they never have a space between them and the word preceding them. . .I think you may have figured that out already due to the sheer amount of chapters you have invested into this story though.
"Their" is a possessive, you probably meant "there" as the sentence went, ". . .and there was. . ."
A spelling correction, "chiselled" isn't spelt, "chizzeled".
On the whole, not bad. . .though that place sounds like there isn't much to look at at the walls, is very sparing with what is there and could be construed as being very austere and cold despite the warmer colours.