Reviews for Cellar Door (Old, unrevised version)
Tofu chapter 25 . 7/30/2013
Impressive. Very impressive.
At the end, when he dies? I'd like to think it was Silvia. Odd me, I apologize.
Beth, I keep thinking "MacBeth" Shakespeare.
Both Beths were bitten by karma.
I look forward to seeing more of this type of writing from you.

Sincerely yours,
Tofu
Tofu chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
Wonderful! I thought you were going to make a Mary Sue type character with Beth, but I can see that you are a much more accomplished writer than that. Silvia...I hate that name, but don't let such a minor opinion from a minor person...I shouldn't be worried. It's just a name.
I keep trailing my thoughts. Sorry about that, I guess it's a habit.
Tofu chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
Mm. I like the way you mixed sane thoughts with insane actions.
Just thought that you killed Beth too quickly...no...gah, I'm arguing with myself. Well thought out. I'll give a full review at the end...if I get to the end. Not because I'm going to drop the story, but because I would be too scared to go on.
kkjoy chapter 25 . 5/12/2012
I am in love with this story. It was so vivid!
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 24 . 6/1/2011
Bitch got what he deserved.

CLAM
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XxXMusicSavesMySoulXxX chapter 23 . 2/19/2010
Awesome story !
writewithcourage chapter 8 . 1/17/2010
nice chapter.
writewithcourage chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
oh no D:
writewithcourage chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
haha, canada must a great place. :D
writewithcourage chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
wow, this should be reviewed more often. this is great. seriously. i love this first chapter. :D
liberated writer chapter 2 . 8/31/2009
i have just joined this site and am going to be submitting some of my own stories as soon as i get the chance, reading the first chapter i think this story has great potential, good use of dialogue and description, can't wait to read on. also be sure to check out some of my writing as soon as i am able to put them on my profile, keep up the good work.
Darby Valentine chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Hey, great stuff! I just read the first chapter!

One thing though... Isn't the Cellar Door a like Jazz Bar? Cuz, there's one in the place I live in and their is...haha.

But, really great story!

Also, if you could find the time... I would love for you to check out my story... It's the first chapter just tell me what ya think... But, yeah.
Rock The Rain chapter 19 . 6/27/2009
LOL, that's funny. All through this I kept thinking of Donnie Darko, and not just because of the title. The feel of it, it's hard to explain. Anyway, I really like this.
Anthem Aeneid chapter 12 . 3/3/2009
Hey! Very nice! I like it. I really like your use of the first person, how it transfers from character to character. I will absolutely add this to Epicity. The only thing that I could find that could use some work is the descriptions of the torturing scenes. I know that sounds really creepy, but you capture your characters personalities so well, but when it comes to the horrifying scenes there isn't enough substance. But at the same time, don't tell us everything... because then nothing would be left to the imagination.

Overall though this story is really strong and I really enjoyed reading the first part!
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