| Reviews for Hooked on Him |
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   Merest chapter 7 . 3/15/2010 Great chapter! |
| Merest chapter 6 . 3/15/2010 Greeat chapter! |
| Merest chapter 5 . 3/14/2010 I love Lucas haha, he's so hilarious. I loved it! |
| Merest chapter 4 . 3/14/2010 If anything gets Lucas riled up, I'm sure he's being serious. She'll learn sooner or later. great chapter! |
| Merest chapter 3 . 3/14/2010 I love this story; great job! :D |
| Merest chapter 2 . 3/14/2010 Either they're rivals or somebody's jealous! Hah. Great chapter! Loved it! |
| Merest chapter 1 . 3/14/2010 Great chapter. Loved it |
| marvelchick chapter 3 . 3/5/2010 This is chapter was great. Although you should try fleshing it out a bit more, and work on your transitions. I'm not trying to be a jerk, its just that I really like it when people give reviews that actually give constructive criticism. I mean we all have space to grow right? Anyway keep up the good work. :) |
| marvelchick chapter 1 . 3/5/2010 This is a good start but I think you have too many transitions. Maybe with fewer of them the story would run more smoothly. Anyway, I'm really liking this, its pretty funny. Aside from what I already mentioned I think this is pretty good. |
| we-love-cookies chapter 32 . 3/5/2010 Love this story...can't wait to read the sequel (in a little while) feel sorry for Lucas though...hopefully they'll get back together again x |
| Pumkin33 chapter 32 . 2/5/2010 Awesome but ending sad |
| Pseudonym59 chapter 32 . 1/3/2010 Sad ending. *Sniff Sniff* ON TO THE SEQUEL! |
| Pseudonym59 chapter 31 . 1/3/2010 NO! DON'T MOVE BACK TO CALIFORNIA! Where does she live now? I forgot. Whoopsie! :p |
| Pseudonym59 chapter 29 . 1/3/2010 Lol! I love the whole debate thing! I HATE SARAH! |
| Pseudonym59 chapter 19 . 1/3/2010 Ooh, Luke's in trouble! |