Need to make this into a review in order to add this to my favourites haha.

Hai! So I just finished the story (duh) and I loved it.

There were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing that can't be solved with a good thorough edit!

At times I think it seemed very, unrealistic. I can't explain how so I don't think I'm being very helpful, but at times it just seemed like the things that happened were just like "...as if." And those times are great, but they seemed to be a frequent occurence which just became, quite frankly, very annoying. That's not to say I didn't enjoy your story, cause I really did, I promise. I'm going to make a start on the sequel now.

LOVED IT.

This is good. I'm glad that she's moving. A great decision on her part by the way. It's refreshing, in other stories they just make the couple end up together in the end unrealistically. I feel bad for Lucas, but he has no excuse for what he did and if they did end up together, it wouldn't work out.

This story...I thought it was kind of slow. There wasn't really that much drama and the majorit of the drama that did go on seemed a bit childish to me. I liked the story of course but maybe if you ever edit this, you can add something more dramatic and speed up the plot. Good job

Awesome story! Can't wait to read the sequel

Oh my gosh this is such an amazng story i loved it soo much and i cant wait to read the sequel YAY!

YOu are an amazing writer :O

~ Maddie xo

ohh shitt what a badas andy iss (:

Okay... well maybe not the next chapter... the sequel then :)

I hope your happy now :(

I actually just cried at the end of that chapter.

Real tears.

I cried.

How sad of me.

But I couldn't help it.

Okay.

I'm going to shut up now and read the next chapter :)

I hope it doesn't make me cry again :O

I actually love Troy. He's so sweet, especially now he's so protective over Sandra. It's just so sweet when he sticks up for her! :')

NO

OMG

At least I can read the sequel.

Haha, I stayed home (I really was sick though) To read this. I knew I'd finish it! GOD GOD GOD!

I cant believe you just ended them like that. I know there has to be a good reason, but still. They were perfect. But oh well, I trust that whatever you have next will be equally good.

NO! UGH! You have to fix them! They cant not be together!

Okay, so first chapter seems interesting, though the intro reminded me a lot of Bella's life. LOL.

i really dont like jake at all...lucas is cool way sweeter thats what i think... great story though dont really love the main chracter though shes kinda being an ass to lucas...i mean hes an ass but he doesnt seem that bad and how she automatically like jake ...i dont like that shes not that badf but somethings i dont like...hmm either way i like the story i hope her n lucas like eachother tho

love the first chapter so far...