|Reviews for Wish Upon a Star|
| Left FP chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Aw...River(s)...this is the sweetest piece of poetry I have ever come across.
Well, to be honest from the summary I thought you would include something about shoes being stolen...
But this was - well, brilliant. Using the cosmic elements to depict the feelings...
It is sweet and I'm sure the person you wrote this for would have been proud to know he inspired you to write such a great piece.
Sorry, I can't give much concrit. But I am being truthful, when I say it is a beautiful piece.
And the best part is, the rhymes come with flow. It doesn't seemed forced...as it happens with most of us.
I wish I could write poetry like this.
Congratulations! Keep up the good work.