Reviews for Can I Like That? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. It's a very relatable poem, as I'm sure we've all experienced something like this at some time or another(if not, consider yourself lucky, I guess). And your voice as an author is incredible. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe then we'll this continuous hurt. this line doesn't make sense... other than that i liked it...shows frustration but at the same time can give you a certain release... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is sad. Maybe it wasn't supposed to be, but it was a good poem! There was one thing that didn't make sense though... 'Maybe then we'll this continuous hurt' Where is the verb? Apart from that I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting and amazing poem :) I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was nice, i really think many people can relate to this... friends aren't meant to be the same if the are then good for them but every one is different and you can expect it to be perfect. Really nice poem, you are really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good! I need to work on writing poems and yours made me smile. I want to have that affect on my readers (though I never posted any of my poems but I do let my friends read them!) The 'like' parts got me quite confused by I'm guessing that's just how the poem goes. I really liked it. Great job! -Suzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, it's a very mature poem, and it has a lot of issues friends today face with each other. I know that I've personally changed myself to fit a friend's interests, and it's hard and hurtful when they still don't appreciate it. This poem has a lot of emotion and it's written very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is amazing. and so many people can relate to it too. this is great and so is all your writing. keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this had a nice flow. One thing I didn't get, though: "Maybe then we’ll this continuous hurt." Is there a word missing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I love the way you rhyme. It's amazing. |