Reviews for Keeper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pretty funny. A mixture of modern-day themes and supernatural goodness. I hope you're able to update this soon. |
![]() ![]() I just want to say that this story had me laughing out loud. You're really talented and the humor is just my type! Well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe you finished this story in that kind of place. I really liked this story its different from the other vampire stories and I'ts very nice to read, I want to meet her boyfriend and know what happened with the journalist I think you should keep writting it |
![]() ![]() HILARIOUS story; I love your writing style! I seriously laughed out loud several times so thank you for that. Can't wait to read your other stories now, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have to write more chapters. This is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's beautiful... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is really good. I hope you continue writing it because this [and you, of course] are going under my favorites. :] -Stace :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() *smirks* I get your point, even though I like Twilight. Keep updating, please? |
![]() ![]() I absolutely adore your story. It is funny and very unpredictable so far. I'm not a fan of Twilight so I was kind of happy I'm awaiting for the next chapter D |
![]() ![]() wow, I am so glad i came across this story. first time finding something here that i read to the end of the first chapter (i just found this site). your writing style is amazing. i love how you fleshed out your vampy characters, there's humor to the boss man and he's not the typical vampire stud that had schoolgirls drooling. I also like our main character. she has sarcasm and wit and actually acts like a keeper taking care of bothesome pets. your writing style is very flowy and i love the commentary in her head. youre doing an excellent job on it and i hope you continue it for a few more chapters. sorry i babbled, you just desere to know that i think you're an excellent writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gay and morbid fascination with popular fiction? Your vampire should hook up with Brand: They’d have loads to talk about. Seriously loving the Twilight mockery though. Although I got a bit confused at the beginning. Did the boyfriend go sparkly or am I being dim? I really like the relationship you have between the two of them, and the dialogue is really snappy. The way the vampire moves through the fashion decades is funny as well. I bet he has a huge wardrobe. Are things going to get more complicated now that there’s a boyfriend on the scene? Or is he staying in the background? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good story! its very interesting. :) cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this much more than the first chapter because it did focus more on the relationship between the vampire and the PA (I love the fact that the vampire doesn’t actually have a name. I also enjoyed the way you described your vampire. He comes across as being slightly creepy and obnoxious, but still quite appealing. Despite the humour there was more of an underlying current of the sinister in this as well. I liked the reference to the ‘occasional crying heap’. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for adding this chapter, it's really good. I love the narrator's voice, this is just amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was really funny! It always seems like whenever a story like this pops up, romance between the boss and the hired always happens. I REALLY like how you wrote this in a completely platonic, and hilarious, relationship. If you write more chapters, I know I would love it! Keep On Writing! ~The Flying Camster |