Reviews for Keeper
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
I just want to say that this story had me laughing out loud. You're really talented and the humor is just my type! Well done
Dalilt chapter 3 . 4/13/2010
I can't believe you finished this story in that kind of place. I really liked this story its different from the other vampire stories and I'ts very nice to read, I want to meet her boyfriend and know what happened with the journalist

I think you should keep writting it
SunnySkies chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
HILARIOUS story; I love your writing style! I seriously laughed out loud several times so thank you for that.

Can't wait to read your other stories now, too.
fredsbank chapter 3 . 12/10/2009
You have to write more chapters. This is great.
Azukeri Mercer chapter 3 . 8/20/2009
It's beautiful...
That One Dork Stacey chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
Wow. This is really good. I hope you continue writing it because this [and you, of course] are going under my favorites. :]

-Stace :]
GoS chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
*smirks* I get your point, even though I like Twilight. Keep updating, please?
Hello chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
I absolutely adore your story. It is funny and very unpredictable so far. I'm not a fan of Twilight so I was kind of happy I'm awaiting for the next chapter D
IndigoSage chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
wow, I am so glad i came across this story. first time finding something here that i read to the end of the first chapter (i just found this site). your writing style is amazing. i love how you fleshed out your vampy characters, there's humor to the boss man and he's not the typical vampire stud that had schoolgirls drooling. I also like our main character. she has sarcasm and wit and actually acts like a keeper taking care of bothesome pets. your writing style is very flowy and i love the commentary in her head. youre doing an excellent job on it and i hope you continue it for a few more chapters. sorry i babbled, you just desere to know that i think you're an excellent writer.
Tawny Owl chapter 3 . 8/13/2009
Gay and morbid fascination with popular fiction? Your vampire should hook up with Brand: They’d have loads to talk about.

Seriously loving the Twilight mockery though. Although I got a bit confused at the beginning. Did the boyfriend go sparkly or am I being dim?

I really like the relationship you have between the two of them, and the dialogue is really snappy. The way the vampire moves through the fashion decades is funny as well. I bet he has a huge wardrobe.

Are things going to get more complicated now that there’s a boyfriend on the scene? Or is he staying in the background?
BreathingSpace92 chapter 3 . 8/13/2009
this is a really good story! its very interesting. :)

cant wait for more!
Tawny Owl chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
I enjoyed this much more than the first chapter because it did focus more on the relationship between the vampire and the PA (I love the fact that the vampire doesn’t actually have a name.

I also enjoyed the way you described your vampire. He comes across as being slightly creepy and obnoxious, but still quite appealing.

Despite the humour there was more of an underlying current of the sinister in this as well. I liked the reference to the ‘occasional crying heap’.
403 Forbidden chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
Thank you for adding this chapter, it's really good. I love the narrator's voice, this is just amazing!
The-Camster chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
This story was really funny! It always seems like whenever a story like this pops up, romance between the boss and the hired always happens. I REALLY like how you wrote this in a completely platonic, and hilarious, relationship. If you write more chapters, I know I would love it!

Keep On Writing!

The Flying Camster
Circa 1991 chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
the story is quite nice.. make other chapters, you got a hell of a good story going.. _
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