Reviews for Stuck in nowhere
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I see that this poem is set around the same theme as "Dollhouse." That's good; it looks as if you're writing a poetry collection that fits together. Nice use of repetition and intense stops (periods). The length of it, as well as the flow, seems to suggest a song-like quality. Is that what you had in mind while you were writing? Nicely done.

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May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Wow this is quite powerful. Extremly relateable. Good job. Peace.