You're good at evoking a pensive mood. The letter was a little cheesy, I thought it was a conversation until I saw the 'Angela xoxo' which kind of ruined the mood as I thought she was reminiscing on her sister yelling at her and it sounded much more realistic than most flashbacks. Ending sentence is a little cheesy but I liked the chapter overall.
-Raven

I liked this chapter. Usually when I click on this genre of stories I find it cliched and leave, but this was fresher and interesting. Good job.
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Loved the new chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds :)

It really is difficult to write on the document manager using just a phone. The auto correct and all that. Excited to read more updates :)

I was wondering why you hadn't updated so I came a checked out your story. Then I see that I haven't written a review for this chapter... even though I know for a fact I have... weird...
Anyway, I probably already told you I loved it! And I can't wait for more. This story is just so unique and different that it draws me a lot more than some other stories :)

I am truly in love with this story. I'm not sure what else to say about it really, other than I'm not sure what to do with myself until you update and add another chapter to it. I'm really looking forward to it. I just.. I love it. Honest. It makes sense why Audrey is the way she is, all things considered. I'm hoping that Daniel/Matt calls or visits his mom soon, too. Please update soon, and keep up the good work.

I finally made it all the way to this chapter! And I must say, I really, really enjoy this story! Audrey and Daniel are two characters that are so interesting to me! And this story's dramatic scenes, I really like! They are very well done and I think when you can write a scene that is dramatic with characters that readers like, they can sometimes feel emotionally connected to said characters, helping them understand what they are feeling. Which, can be hard to do. So great job! This is a really great story, I am enjoying it :)

I love this story! Started reading and couldnt stop! It should have a lot more attention I think, because a lot of the stories on here are poorly written... But this has so much heart and you portray the emotions so well!

Another good chapter, I'm glad Audrey is spending time with her sister, Anna seems to really care about her and her wellbeing :) Daniel is sweet and I liked how he wrote the date they met in the book, I'm looking forward to more.

Well it's a good thing that she is a successful applicant for a heart transplant... Right? I'm happy that him not noticing she was gone and all didn't turn into an all-out fight. And that they're going to stop drinking quite so much.
I'm guessing that you're a Sydney sider? If not, well, you seem to have done your research haha. It's different-and good- to see a story set in Sydney. I have to admit, compared to other hospitals, RPA is quite nice with that historical part at the entrance and the Jacaranda Cafe. Sorry about this random little ramble :)

Ah, well. There's not much to say here, so I guess my review won't be as long as the last one -w-"

Anyway, still awesome narrative. I've seen other stories where 90% of the reviews say "this is the best thing EVAH" and stuff and the truth is, well, the stories are not THAT good. In this case, the same thing happens. Everyone tells you your narrative is beautiful. Except in this case, it is true!

I love it!

And you have me in suspense every moment, believe it or not. I especially love the last sentence. Keep it up! This story deserves so much more attention!

Wow...its a very beautiful story.

Aww I'm really enjoying this! It's sort of depressing but so addictive! I came here after you left a review on the story and then spent the whole afternoon reading :)
Update soon! I want to know her name! :D

Since you were kind enough to leave a review on my work, I thought I'd return the favor! I quite like what you have here, this is an interesting first chapter and Fay is quite an interesting character, someone who 'creates names for herself' and makes things up, because she doesn't like facts. Not only does it make sense, but its quite interesting. Nicely done here! I'll be reading more for sure.

Hi! I found your story through A Drop of Romeo... and it really is beautiful. I think this chapter so far is my favourite, I just felt like I could imagine the scene and emotions perfectly!