|Reviews for Rainbow Boy|
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/23/2016
Kelly you piece of shit
| LovelyLorelei chapter 9 . 12/10/2010
Poor Ryan. It's times (and stories) like this that make me grateful that the people who surround me are very tolerant.
I really want to see Brad's reaction to Ryan being gay and liking him, but I have a feeling it won't be a good one. In fact, I feel this story won't have much of a happy ending, but one of the genres is romance so that gets my hopes up again. And then I realize that the romance doesn't necessarily have to be between Brad and Ryan. XD
I hope it will be, though. :3
| writing-addict77 chapter 8 . 7/8/2010
Hey what's that author's note supposed to mean...lol jk. I've been meaning to write, thanks for reminding me. :) Anyway, nice to see an update in this one, although (and I've read the next chapter so this is two reviews in one) Ryan seems to be getting really emo...I like him when he's only depressed. Anyway, can't wait for more!
| Megii of Mysteri OusStranger chapter 9 . 6/24/2010
Omg you came up with more scary coincidences! The art teacher at my old high school is short with curly black hair! WHAT'S WITH THAT?
Another fantastic chapter!
| Forestwater chapter 9 . 6/24/2010
The shit. It hath hitteth the fan.
This was a great chapter with a lot of tension, though not the most cheerful. Do good things ever happen to Ryan? The only thing that I can think of suggesting (this is the kind of thing that only springs to mind in reviewing, more's the pity) is more description on body language in the future. Expressions, movements, etc. would add more emotion than simply what they're saying. Actions speaking louder than words and all that.
Very good, though. And I forsee quite a bit of angst . . .
| Forestwater chapter 8 . 6/22/2010
Oh, the drama! I don't quite understand his backstory, but I guess I'm not supposed to. And as long as YOU get it, it's all good. Though I meant to ask, how could the guitar stay dry if she's carrying it on top of her head? Sorry I didn't ask that before. XD
| Emoshun15 chapter 7 . 4/1/2010
oh my god lol i feel so bad for ryan! you are just to cruel to your charecters! i read your other story, help me, that was amazing! lol this story sounds like it will be amazing too. I cant wait for brad to realise how great ryan is. lol your sub chapters are confusing me though lol
| Sarahj259 chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
Okay, so I was a little leary about this story at first because I thought it would be just another teenage love-triangle drama, but its actually alot better then I expected! Good job! I love it!
| Tyna C chapter 7 . 6/25/2009
Finally had a chance to read your chapter. It was funny in some parts. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope its sooner than this one was.
| writing-addict77 chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Ryan's life sucks...poor Kelly. I actually feel bad for her. And Cassie.
| Forestwater chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Well, I was going to say that the shit had hit the fan . . . but I suppose it hasn't completely until Brad finds out, hmm? Anyway, I liked this chapter. I still think Ryan's being an asshole, but it's mostly understandable. I just kind of feel bad for Kelly; that's a hard thing to adjust to.
But I'm mostly just super glad you wrote something! OMG it's been so long! It's been so long that I even said "OMG"! LOL (teeheeheehee!)
| writing-addict77 chapter 6 . 4/11/2009
Ok...I really want all of this explained. What is up with these two? And what does it have to do with Ryan?
| Forestwater chapter 6 . 4/7/2009
Short but sweet.
| kandance chapter 6 . 4/7/2009
yay finally a new chapter . . .the only problem well you going to have to explain to me about what is going on b/c i forgot . . .so yeah sorry but you know my memory, its pretty crapp !
| rachelaine chapter 5 . 3/7/2009
Ha. I've finally started to read this! I really want to know what Cassie wants to talk to Ryan about. I bet she knows he's gay. I wish Brad wasn't so harsh while they were watching the movie, but oh well. Update soon! :D