m, is a good story, nicely told. however, i'd say keep checking for gramatical mistakez: to instead of too was the only one that really glared at me. good job c:

"Thank god for flash photography." teehee

"“No Liz. I'm moving.”" *gasp*

nice chapter good ending

Haha.

My squeals aren't THAT high pitched xD

Update soon.

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taylor swift concert! WOOT!

i really like your voice in this peice:)

I'm very excited to see what is going to come with this story. Keep writing! :]

The last line is completely true. Update soon!

I loved these two sentences: If you talk to anybody, they will say that high school was the most fun years of their lives. Until you leave, you cannot fully, embrace that opinion.

THAT IS SO TRUE! I thought my life was horrible in high school, that the drama was never ending. Well, guess what? When you get out, the drama is never ending, and it's much more bothersome because you have to pay bills and make a living somehow. I had fun in high school days, miss it sometimes. Well, some of it.

This is great so far. I've never read a story set in Scotland, so that's cool. I am part Scottish :)

Update soon! I'm interested to read further!

very nice beginning to the story. i especially like the intro it was very well written. I didn't see any typos or grammatical errors so that's nice. The only thing that kinda bothered me was that they were talking about Barrack Obama but they live in scotland. i know that he's important ,but it sounded like they talked about it frequently...which doesn't make sense to me.

hehe, but it doesn't really matter i'm just being nitpicky:)

very nice beginning!