Reviews for Real Love Or Pretend Love? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey... great start... hehe ;) contract unLuKy |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting..and the sneak peak omg..alyssa was pregnant. i bet she cheated on 's why he doesnt want to see her anymore. update soon.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg...*speechless because of Calvin* Now I hate Calvin.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heya. i liked this chapter and i can't wait until the next one. The sneak peak is such a teaser. I'm wondering if she's going to have sex with him? I can't wait. PLEASE update. SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon. i want to see what happened btwn alyssa and clavin. and if that plan is true, why isn't leah acting more shocked? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great storyline so far and great characters. I hope you do continue it and hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i love it! Leah is so cool i'm not surprised at lauren's reaction i mean, it's kinda expected you HAVE to keep writing it! inform me of updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() COOL STORY. :) Hope you update. : |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's about time you updated. I liked it but i could have been better. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chappie. I like Steven but then I also like Calvin. I prefer first person. Get well and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, I like the new carachter in it. And I like both first person and third person but i suggest you choose one and dont change back and forth. And I loved the outsiders, I love SodaPop and Johnny Boy ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I need you with me. Don't go." is my favorite line. lol I'm a sucker for a love story. Even though I'm not a fan of your writing, the plot line is good. I want to know what happens. Your writing is just hard for me to grasp sometimes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! dats such a sweet ending! i hope u update soon! ill be waitingg and happy valentines dayy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more |