|Reviews for Velvet Shadows|
| pixibones chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
Honestly "Night Cross" Is a bit cheesy, something like "Lankford" or if His name was Victor instead seems more appropriate. Other then that I'm enjoying this story very much.
| Nocturnal-Silver-Wolf chapter 29 . 7/29/2011
AWWWWWWWWW I actually like Arc waaaaaay better than Night, though Night was cool too... Yeah, well, awesome story! :D
| witeaya chapter 4 . 6/19/2011
like u said, night is dreamy and yummy.
| Angelxoxo13 chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
Wow! Nice story! You live in Singapore? I'm in Brunei. Hai, hai neighbour. :)
| Fallen Angel07 chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Let me just say oh. My. God. You're story was so amazing that I immideately added it to my favorites and I've been reading it non stop over the past few days! It is absolutely amazing! And let me just say, I think I've fallen in love with Night. He's just like the perfect guy (in my opinion) and I thank you for making him! I DEFINATELY plan on reading the sequel. I'm quite excited for your sequel! I just loved your story! I can't express that enough! :D:D:D You've entertained my mind for quite some time and I'm hoping Night will stay in my mind. :D Thank you!
| RatedRachel chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Your story is so amazing, I love your story! It is so intense and really pulls you in and you just can't stop reading until you are done! I love how you make everything so full of emotion and meaning, i wish I can write like you! So jealous!
| Min chapter 29 . 12/16/2010
I am definitely in love with ur story. :
AND you are definitely an author to watch out for.
This story superb and I finally came to the end.
Lets see. This story brought to me
countless slepless nights... But i bet its more tiring for u.
Great storyline and interesting characters. I hope u can continue or
I dunno what to do on the com anymore! :
Anyways just wanted u to noe that u expressed the feelings really well and I really liked the humour used in this story. I had quite a few times when i suddenly laughed out loud.
Um.. So yeah. The 64th review ends here.
Keep up the good -no, great, no, AWESOME- work.
Um. Cheerios! :)
P.s: Pardon spelling\grammar\whatever errors. :
P.s.s: I cant wait to start reading ur related works.
| fluffycloud chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
Some grammatical errors I would like to point out:
1)"Because we would associate them to death"- should be 'with' not 'to'
2)"Have there been any occurings of vamp...I mean them attacking"- i think it should be 'occurrence' instead of 'occurrings'
I think she's just infatuated with him at this point since he is so cute, different and cool. That's why she wants to spend time with him. But "I wanted to know so much more about this guy. I wanted to unveil the mysteries cloaked under that soft expression." makes me think she's falling in love with him. I think that's a bit too fast. She has only known about him for,what, 5 hours?
And he's perfect in everything ah? Sigh. Perfect looks and voice. I don't know what to think about this. I know everyone has expectations about vampires. They are expected to be perfect and all since all the books out there described them as such. Hence, I do understand why you characterised Night this way. But I would like to see some imperfections. Like maybe he always get lost because he can't recognise his way or something. It would make Night seem different.
And of course she would see him again. Sigh. Argh. And she would have to sit with him. This screams "twilight!" and any other romance novel out there.
You know, I hope she will have really good friends in the school. I can see that she's going to end up with Night. But I hope he won't be the only person she's interacting with. I hope this won't be a repeat of Bella in Twilight.
I like that he gave her the laptop. Sweet!
Despite what I have written, I would just like to assure you that I like your story a lot! This is one of the best online stories I have read. You write well and the story is quite interesting. There is extensive development of the background and many other things. It's not just boy meet girl. You do try to portray Chris' relationship with other people. I do appreciate that.
| fluffycloud chapter 2 . 2/26/2010
Not bad:) Will Cynthia be an antagonist? Like she's a double-crosser or sth? Or does she like the cool guy?
| MoonDemon36 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Im really liking this story,can't wait to continue now! hehe
| Andie chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Just a suggestion, story has great potential but there are some errors in the English grammar. Perhaps have someone correct it for you? Would make it a lot easier to read :).
| Alexandra Paige chapter 29 . 8/15/2009
This story was fantastic! I love your writing style! :)
Can't wait to read the sequel...
| Lupa Dracolis chapter 29 . 7/22/2009
I don't really have anything to say except that I absolutely love this story! It has a great plot, and fantastic characters. I love the way that you've used so many different species. Keep up the good work!
| taylor chapter 11 . 7/16/2009
i love this story! one suggestion though, in chapter 11 Night says that he could get "millions of times prettier than you", which is horrible! I understand what he is trying to say but i dont think that callous remark fits with his character...
| Paws4Suze chapter 29 . 6/27/2009
Wow, i loved the story! It was really well written, and had an exelant plotline. Exept for a few gramatical and spelling mistakes once in a while, I deem it, one of my favorite stories! D