Reviews for Velvet Shadows
CrimsonSenses chapter 20 . 3/23/2009

I bet...Night!

Mwhahaha xD

I'm so frigin' sure it was him...


Tricia.something like that chapter 19 . 3/19/2009
love it love it
CrimsonSenses chapter 19 . 3/17/2009
Oh... I'll need to read it again...I've forgotten...

xD Great! Btw, we still don't know what sort of species Wes is. Are you going to let us know?

Fantastic chapter! MOREMOREMORE!
Sakiru Yume chapter 19 . 3/16/2009
Dang, Chris is, like, psycho or something. But how long can she keep that facade up? And do any of the vampires have telepathy?
Sakiru Yume chapter 18 . 3/9/2009
Um, Twilight much? Sorry, but that whole "clean break" thing seemed really...Twilight-esque. It was a good chapter though. Kind of a little predictable, but good.
Tricia.something like that chapter 18 . 3/9/2009
again, awsome. can't wait for more... I'm kinda getting addicted to this story.
CrimsonSenses chapter 18 . 3/9/2009
Whaáá, freak out for Chris... *weep*...

Waiting for the next one! It's soo sad, and I do feel sorry for Chris! What happened to Night! His dad must have some freaky brainpowers...ieuww!

Can't wait!

I'm really glad that the other vampires stayed and Sam is there. They'll hopefully provide the answers...hopefully?

Sakiru Yume chapter 17 . 3/7/2009
Ooh, cliffhanger. I liked the chapter, but that thing with what he wanted Victor to do was a little disturbing. And I'm assuming that the last two paragraphs are related to the person coming from the limo. Just a guess.
Tricia.something like that chapter 17 . 3/6/2009
loveitloveitloveit, I'm like 90% sure I know who the guy from the limo is. And the last part about the knocking is someone coming to warn night that his dad is here isn't it... AH this is an addicting story.
CrimsonSenses chapter 17 . 3/6/2009
Ah, knock,knock...who's there? I wanna know, so you'd better post the next chapter son x)

It's so good, I just love the story!

Though, just one little thing, you should check your verbs a little bit. Sometimes you tend to use the wrong tense. But that's all, the rest is absolutely fantastic!

Sakiru Yume chapter 16 . 3/1/2009
Nice. I personally thought Victor was going to win and was wondering what he would pick out. Just a matter of curiosity: was one reason you didn't have Victor win that you couldn't figure out what he would pick? Because I couldn't.
CrimsonSenses chapter 16 . 3/1/2009
I've read the whole thing today! in one day and it's bloody unbelievable! It's so good, and it's a great take on a twilight version xD fantastic! I'm waiting for more... x]
CrimsonSenses chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
Yep, definitly Twilightish xD

Luf it!

Night is really sweet...scary sweet...
CrimsonSenses chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
Hey, I've just started it and it's really god!

I can't help but think of Twilight when I read it xD

Don't worry, it's great and I love it! I'm gonna read it to the end!

Tricia.something like that chapter 15 . 2/28/2009
awsome like always sorry i didn't get back to you sooner. Keep up the good work though.
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