Great chapter. I loved the door thing. I was seriously laughing

""There's a perfectly functioning door out front," I say. "It has a doorknob and hinges; in fact it's totally kick ass. It's like the best door ever, and it's kinda insulted that you're spending so much time with the window.""

Cant wait for the next chapter

UPDATE!

Great stuff, Love this story. :P I still reckon your character is awesome :D The way you write is neat, serious but not really :) Cant wait for the next chaper :)

Hey, I think this is great, and not really that cliche at all. I love the humour in it, and Noel is freaking awesome, even from the little bit that Ive read! Its great :D

cant wait for more

hope you update soon

-ifly*hugs*

Hahahahaha. There's some awesome humor in this story (For example, that scene of her failing at tricking the drug guy XD). It's all very interesting and intriguing also. So... at first, I felt for Avery and was rooting for him. I wonder why she was seeing someone else, and I feel bad for him because of it (though I realize I don't yet know the whole story). But I find myself now hoping (since the scene where he picks the lock of her desk drawer) that H somehow stands for Eric, hahaha. I can't wait to find out the answers to the "Who tried to kill Noel with a baseball bat, and why?" and the "Who is this H fellow that proposed to Noel?" mysteries, along with all that go with it. Such as "Why didn't Noel just break up with Avery instead of seeing this guy behind his back?". *Cough* Anyway, I'd also like to know about this screaming going on at the end of the chapter. Curiouser and curiouser. So update as soon as possible, yeah? :D Please? Pretty great work thus far, and I look forward to more :)

God bless,

Chelsea .

Really like this story, looking forward to an update!

My heart cried when I realized that I couldn't press the next chapter button again. Please update soon, I really enjoy this a lot!

Sometimes her sarcasm gets a little confusing but most of the time I'm able to keep up. That's really the only thing I've noticed.

~A

i always wanted to know how it felt to go into a coma and when u wake up would u remeber what u last said or what

I'm loving this story so far. It's an interesting take on the whole amnesia thing.

) Mandraco.

I like the concept of this story. I've always loved stories that dealt with amnesia and people rediscovering themselves.

I thought the events were kind of confusing because the beginning doesn't seem to gel with the story quite yet. I'm sure it'll get fleshed out later since the break up seems to be the catalyst to everything that happened. I wonder why you chose two years instead of any other time but I'm sure it'll all work out.

One thing I did notice is that you didn't describe her room. I don't understand her reaction to it since you didn't explain why it was such a surprise. I think it's because it looked similar to the kitchen and living room but I think you should have elaborated since she has such a strong emotional reaction to it.

Nice job!

Really good! I don't see why people haven't reviewed this! I want to know who the elusive 'H' is.

Keeping eagle eyes for the next chapter,

-Arianna

This story has great potential, can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you update soon!