|Reviews for The Disasters of Experimenting|
| VonLow chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I like the last story, except I have one problem with it.
An ocean escaping from its banks, setting free a world of insanity.
Oceans do not have banks, so the imagery is a bit skewed. They have Shores, but I think, perhaps, A river might suit this particular story.
| Mr. Aek chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
For the first one, "many were dying" it just doesn’t seem to fit - try changing the words.. Other than that it was good :)
For the second one, that was just dark.. Someone needs to loosen up :p