|Reviews for The Freshman|
| davidseven chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
I liked the structure. You set up a very clear scene in the first paragraph with the three images of the outer signs of college and what it does internally; then lead us through what it does to you.
I especially liked the last line to be honest. A throw-away comment that sums up entirely his perspective of things.
Very powerful stuff I think.
| tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Very great job. The beginning was a bit confusing, but then it got better. The last line is questionable, but that doesn't stop the wonderful outline of your work.
Your emotions are real, and the italized words do it well.
"the best way to stop is never to start,"