Reviews for A Debt to be Paid by Marrying their Son
The Weatherwitch chapter 5 . 8/20/2011
LOL!

this is brilliant xD

please please please update soon?
EaTeR Of DrEaMs chapter 4 . 12/3/2010
FINALLY YOU UPDATED! HEHE! I love this new chappie...please continue this story! I am completely in lvoe with it now and I am nervous to see what happens at thediner! I'll have fingers crossed that Louis doesn't mess it up. Awesome story so far! Please update soon! TTFN :3!
Jay chapter 4 . 11/14/2010
Continue quickly, pleasums?
EvaJoLynn chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
This was one of the first stories I read on fictionpress and since getting my account had tried to find this story.

I was so pleased to not only find the story but that you had updated

I think it's interesting how you put the twist on forced marriage because of a debt...
EaTeR Of DrEaMs chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
This story is funny! I like it A LOT and sadly I can relate to Louis, right down to the clumsiness and being given a boy's name (were my parents on crack or something?). Anyhoo, I love the plot and the whole marry our son thing coupled with the blackmail consequence to the agreement makes it a really interesting story! So please update soon! I'm waiting patiently for your next chappy! TTFN!
E.Freaka-1o1 chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
one word: interesting!
Bombora chapter 2 . 9/30/2009
everyone's going on (in the reviews) about a matthew. who's he?

ok nice story!
JadeRenee chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
That was nice...Try to make it longer and funnier! ;)
sooner or later its over chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
where did he go?

post again soon :)
sooner or later its over chapter 5 . 4/13/2009
chance stroot is beautiful.

just saying i googled him.

and he is cute.
HELLOPANDA chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
This seems interesting. SO far, there haven't been much developments, but Matthew and Louis seem to hate each others' guts! I'm guessing what happens in the end...but I'm interested to see the story develop. I really hope it will be funny with lots of weird events happening to the both of them! I am really looking forward to this story so keep updating!

~Amanda~
CutieSOS chapter 5 . 3/10/2009
her moms a bitch

but this chapter was realy good

i liked it alot

keep up the good work
lila wheeler chapter 5 . 3/9/2009
i really love this story and i hope you keep writing.I cant believe it i think her parents are shouldnt let her marry him but who knows he might be a nice guy.
Counting Luv Toxic Stars chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
I feel kinda bad for Louis

But I think her and matthew together

Would b a good thing for the other to be around
CutieSOS chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
her parents cant agree to that seriously

if he got in trouble groping girls

then why would her parents ever want her near the kid

great chapter full of tension

keep up the good work
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