Reviews for A Debt to be Paid by Marrying their Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! this is brilliant xD please please please update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY YOU UPDATED! HEHE! I love this new chappie...please continue this story! I am completely in lvoe with it now and I am nervous to see what happens at thediner! I'll have fingers crossed that Louis doesn't mess it up. Awesome story so far! Please update soon! TTFN :3! |
![]() ![]() Continue quickly, pleasums? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one of the first stories I read on fictionpress and since getting my account had tried to find this story. I was so pleased to not only find the story but that you had updated I think it's interesting how you put the twist on forced marriage because of a debt... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is funny! I like it A LOT and sadly I can relate to Louis, right down to the clumsiness and being given a boy's name (were my parents on crack or something?). Anyhoo, I love the plot and the whole marry our son thing coupled with the blackmail consequence to the agreement makes it a really interesting story! So please update soon! I'm waiting patiently for your next chappy! TTFN! |
![]() ![]() one word: interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() everyone's going on (in the reviews) about a matthew. who's he? ok nice story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was nice...Try to make it longer and funnier! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() where did he go? post again soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() chance stroot is beautiful. just saying i googled him. and he is cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems interesting. SO far, there haven't been much developments, but Matthew and Louis seem to hate each others' guts! I'm guessing what happens in the end...but I'm interested to see the story develop. I really hope it will be funny with lots of weird events happening to the both of them! I am really looking forward to this story so keep updating! ~Amanda~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() her moms a bitch but this chapter was realy good i liked it alot keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really love this story and i hope you keep writing.I cant believe it i think her parents are shouldnt let her marry him but who knows he might be a nice guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel kinda bad for Louis But I think her and matthew together Would b a good thing for the other to be around |
![]() ![]() ![]() her parents cant agree to that seriously if he got in trouble groping girls then why would her parents ever want her near the kid great chapter full of tension keep up the good work |