Omg! I just finished your story and I love your writing style and your ideas. I loved how everyone changed and grew. And I even liked everyone in it. Even the king. You write everyone and everything so perfectly. If this would have been a book it would've been worth the But :) definitely 5 stars from me. Hope I can be a good writer like you one day. And I really like loki. If you write or wrote a book about him, I must read it. Keep up the amazing work :)

Wow! What a whirlwind this story was! It had me hooked with the first chapter and had me on a rollercoaster of emotions. Well done!

This was a really great story - I love the characters and the big picture story line was so interesting. The main character's relationship was very cute - I am personally more of a love/hate romance fan - but they fit this story perfectly. It was very sweet.

I look forward to reading your other works!

Not exactly M rated material. A bit disappointed, I was waiting for some action

Will there be a sequel to this?

This was good...

I loved this story! It was well written and well articulated. The characters were dynamic and seemed "real."
It was well worth the time and very entertaining. :) I found myself fascinated with the story and characters pretty early on and could not wait to find out what would happen next.

My only problem is that there are still a few unanswered questions such as was it really that Alisa was special? There were references to her energy being different and her slowly being able to see things that humans arent able to normally. There was also her being called "changling" so I have to wonder if ir meant anything. And I also had a sense that while things were ending nicely this was not the complete end to the story. Which might just be the way the author wanted to leave it. Sometimes its nice to leave a world full of possibilities to think on.

Either way a great read and great story!

I'm really amazed at this world that you've created. I really like the characters that you've built. For me, I think that there were no inconsistencies in your story. I felt it ingenious that you called heaves as home. You're a really good writer :)

ooohhh! I know I haven't been reviewing your story but I got to this point thoroughly enjoying it :D I really really really love this! *shriek*

Please, please publish this. This is a book I would buy and cherish. It'd be one of the books I read so many times over that the spine was broken and pages were falling out. Your story itself is compelling and well-written, but on top of that your characters and phenomenal and relatable, and their dynamics are so carefully constructed. The character development is gradual and natural, and you feel yourself growing and moving with them- all of them. I especially loved the Shakespeare illusions you made to Puck and Loki. If there is one thing you should absolutely do in your life, it is to send this to a publishing company and not take no for an answer.

My eyes burn because I read this all in one go. Loki sounded so charming and I loved all the moments when he was in the story I love how Halcore had flaws like his devotion to his duties and Raven is such a sweetheart ;_; I kinda wished that there was a little more Halcore/Alisa at the end because all the (sexual?) tension around them left me wanting more about them. Closure I guess? But awesome story!

I throughly enjoyed this story . It was nicely put together and had a interesting plot . I really wish there were more stories similar to this genre on this site :/ perhaps you can start a new story similar to this one ?
I would be very happy if you do . Thanks

I thoroughly enjoy this story. One main thing I found was that without any line break of signal of different view points it can get confusing. Having to re read to make sense breaks the flow. Even if it was just a line or something super simple would help. Great work though!

lovely story!

maybe too many paragraphs starting with "she"...?

You've got something interesting going on here. I'm planning to keep reading