|Reviews for A Single Bite|
| Mr. Dude chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Well, I must admit, I was uncertain at first, but I have found myself being glued to my computer screen. Please keep writting. Really, this was fun to read... well I've just finished the first chapter, so I've got plenty left to read. haha
Oh when I say keep writting, keep writting what ever it is you are wanting to write. haha
Obligation for something you love can really steal the joy from the activity. Though I do hope this one is finished... or is going to be finished... haha
| b chapter 7 . 9/8/2011
| Bleh chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
1st person POV sucks. If you want to live out your zombie fantasy...continue doing it your head please.
Dont novelize it...
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Very good story. The only few complaints I have is that the conflict begins almost immediately, I recommend next time providing some more time for the reader to get to know the characters, that would be very good, the reader would relate to a character, giving more emotion when it adds up to the climax ( The group of teenagers staring this story do experience some friends dying, but I don't wanna spoil it for people who haven't read it yet).
Anyways, the beginning is to immediate and the Ash's friends die WAY TO EARLY. Crap, I just spoiled the story.
| You suck chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
1st person POV ruined this story as it has ruined many others...
| evilgirl369 chapter 7 . 12/5/2009
This is so interesting, I was wondering what had happened to his family.I can't believe his father did that to his family, it's terrible.
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 7 . 10/26/2009
ahh, just what i needed after three straight hours of left 4 dead lol
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 6 . 9/15/2009
man, when you killed jade... that was harsh... :P more please!
| KelaBelle chapter 5 . 7/24/2009
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 5 . 7/21/2009
Tiff and Ash... Never meant to be.
Oh well, nice chapter!
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 4 . 6/25/2009
Kat was my favourite...
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 3 . 6/16/2009
I was just thinking about this story the other day... Well, it's about time for a new chapter! We're starting to see a little bit of how the main character became the guy everyone depended on, which is nice. But one request... Can ya make the chapters a bit shorter? Please? It might make people more inclined to read. (Word count can be a bit daunting sometimes, but if it's split up with lots of chapters, it doesn't seem so long.)
And that's just a bit of constructive criticism that you can ignore if you want to lol.
Update soon, please!
| Pyro Flare chapter 2 . 4/20/2009
This is quite an amazing story you've made here. It is simply incredible. I am looking forward to more of this story.
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
long. ass. chapter! whatevs. it was great, better than the first. it had more descriptions and more action. keep it up!
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
A few spelling and punctuation errors here and there, but nothing major. The action and blood and guts parts were all there and well thought out, but maybe a little more suspense would make the story feel more... real. Pretty good first chapter though. The different zombies reminded me of Left 4 Dead :P
On a side-note, you should read Stephen King's "Cell" if you haven't already. It's one of the best zombie books I have ever come across.
Anyway, continue soon!