Reviews for Touch Me
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
You can really feel all the emotion in this and I really like the rhyme scheme. I'm adding this to my favorites because I feel I can relate to it so much! Wonderfully written.
S chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
I really like this poem, it made me feel something inside, like little fire in me, haha, i remember things that happended me, thanks.
JFantasist chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
KKYYAA! i love it!..so deep! so cool! so romantic! love love love it!
Angela Nichole chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
aww... I really like this one too. though, there is one line that stuck out to me, "I need it, and I do not care", in my opinion, i don't think you need the second part in that line. but other than that, it's a fantastic poem.

you have talent! keep writing! :)
Safi Kittykat chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
WHOA! thats amazing! i'm TOTALLY adding this to my favorites! wow, its so good! i wish i wrote it, haha. keep up the good work! :)
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Beautifully rhymed and well written.

Write on!