Reviews for Notes From Detention
draggyvamp909 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Hmm...I was surprised; this touched upon personal feelings and emotions. It's very good, and I think you really had a good point in this.
starbance chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
am I sensing a relationship on the rise? hmm? well I like it
FrostFire15 chapter 1 . 1/10/2009

The pranks- were they your ideas? Do you speak from experience? ;) just kidding.

But really, nice short story. Right amount of characterization, plot, and emotion. Just one thing:

"My post-pubescent friend doesn’t seem to be enjoying this quality time together. He’s rotating between glaring at me and looking at the clock on the wall."

ARe you talking about the teacher in that sentence, or some other guy who is never mentioned again?