Whee! You make wonderful realistic fiction :D

and you can really speak through your character's eyes!

Kudos to you :)

XD This was nice. And I'm being very honest when I say that it is. And I'll be a little more honest, XD something was a little wrong with the tempo of the story though. It's a little fast, but it's fine. XD The first part, with the shooter, was very descriptive (and I mean that in a good way). But I'm a little lost why the shooter was there. XD But, again, it's not bad. Wes is a nice character, and I wonder what the gorgeous, brown-haired guy's name is...

I can't believe this is your fist fic! It's great. Please, continue writing.

XD Haha, Gay_Magnet, what a nice username. ;) I hope you don't mind the slight criticism, Miss endingstars. Please continue writing!

~King Echo